My Favorite Tree
Children's Poetry Contest (163 words)81 total reviews
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is a delightful poem for the kiddies. You chose your rhymes well, which only serves to enhance the reading experience.
In addition, it's also educational. Children are always interested to learn about animals. Nicely done. Hugs, Lou
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This is a delightful poem for the kiddies. You chose your rhymes well, which only serves to enhance the reading experience.
In addition, it's also educational. Children are always interested to learn about animals. Nicely done. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
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Thank you Louise for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Taffspride
What a fun children's poem you have penned. It flows well, and made me chuckle as I thought of younger days clambering up trees.
These lines really make me smile and brought back great memories.
Then I heard my dear mother as she called to me
So I quickly climbed down from my favorite tree.
Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
Ann
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What a fun children's poem you have penned. It flows well, and made me chuckle as I thought of younger days clambering up trees.
These lines really make me smile and brought back great memories.
Then I heard my dear mother as she called to me
So I quickly climbed down from my favorite tree.
Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
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Thank you Ann for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from robina1978
An absolute excellent photo of a squirrel that complements your poem perfectly. I wondered whether it was you in the tree or the squirrel, but I think you. You saw many things that day. Then your mother called. Nice AABB rhyme which is so suitable for kids. Best wishes for the contest.
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An absolute excellent photo of a squirrel that complements your poem perfectly. I wondered whether it was you in the tree or the squirrel, but I think you. You saw many things that day. Then your mother called. Nice AABB rhyme which is so suitable for kids. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
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Thank you Robina for your encouraging and lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancyrabbrose
That is a sweet poem. I am sure children would love it, as well as "the young in heart" adults. The images of different wild life in your favorite tree make the poem come alive. Well done.
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That is a sweet poem. I am sure children would love it, as well as "the young in heart" adults. The images of different wild life in your favorite tree make the poem come alive. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
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Thank you Nancy for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"My Favorite Tree" is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. To have such a tree would be Heaven. It was a true pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
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"My Favorite Tree" is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. To have such a tree would be Heaven. It was a true pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
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Thank you Duchess for your most encouraging review and the amazing 6 stars. Very grateful.
Blessings
Janet
Janet, you certainly deserved the six, sparkling stars.
Blessings, the Duchess
Comment from danpald
A play ground of love
That teaches life gives
Space to the other
In the tree that does live
So the lesson moves
As the creatures share
The life that hold dear
The same tree to be one
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A play ground of love
That teaches life gives
Space to the other
In the tree that does live
So the lesson moves
As the creatures share
The life that hold dear
The same tree to be one
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging and fun review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Beara Bella
You have a nice little poem here. The child has wonder, terror, and then joy as the day in the tree ended with mom a calling. Brings you back to the joys of childhood and how simple life is as a child.
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You have a nice little poem here. The child has wonder, terror, and then joy as the day in the tree ended with mom a calling. Brings you back to the joys of childhood and how simple life is as a child.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from LIJ Red
I was ten and about fifty feet up a white oak and my mom yelled at me.
I yelled back and she invented a word. "What the flooster are you doing up there?" I came down straightaway...good rhymes for reading to kids.
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I was ten and about fifty feet up a white oak and my mom yelled at me.
I yelled back and she invented a word. "What the flooster are you doing up there?" I came down straightaway...good rhymes for reading to kids.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging and fun review. I like a mother who can create a new word and get an obedient child. LOL
Blessings
Janet
Comment from writeapoem
This is a great children's rhyme. About the nature around thier home. I watch such critters in my back yard. I love nature and how they enjoy themseles.
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This is a great children's rhyme. About the nature around thier home. I watch such critters in my back yard. I love nature and how they enjoy themseles.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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welcome
Comment from Unspoken94
From the child's perspective. Very well done. I will be
reading this to my three year old granddaughter
tomorrow night. This is excellent and she will be able
to understand it. -Bill
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From the child's perspective. Very well done. I will be
reading this to my three year old granddaughter
tomorrow night. This is excellent and she will be able
to understand it. -Bill
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
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Thank you Bill for your encouraging review. I hope your granddaughter enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
