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Comment from hannahorion
Form: I think this is iambic tetrameter with AAAB rhyming scheme. Title: Witty Warren. Theme: "Witty Warren rarely works" instead he writes lines while others do the work. Comment: Five quatrains which describe how witty Warren shirks work. This poem is easy to read and recite due to the chosen meter and rhyme scheme. The language is comfortably colloquial and free of difficult phrases. I found it a pleasure to read and recite and interesting to think about. I gave it a five star rating.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Form: I think this is iambic tetrameter with AAAB rhyming scheme. Title: Witty Warren. Theme: "Witty Warren rarely works" instead he writes lines while others do the work. Comment: Five quatrains which describe how witty Warren shirks work. This poem is easy to read and recite due to the chosen meter and rhyme scheme. The language is comfortably colloquial and free of difficult phrases. I found it a pleasure to read and recite and interesting to think about. I gave it a five star rating.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, hannahorion, for the thorough and interesting review. Bill
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My pleasure.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Would be the dream world of many of us writers if we could quit our day jobs and spend all our time writing, and making the kind of living at it we want to. Fortunately for me, I get to experience the best of both worlds. This well written poem tells it like it is and was rather enjoyable to read. Well done.
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Would be the dream world of many of us writers if we could quit our day jobs and spend all our time writing, and making the kind of living at it we want to. Fortunately for me, I get to experience the best of both worlds. This well written poem tells it like it is and was rather enjoyable to read. Well done.
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Brett, for the great review. Bill
