Little Poems
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Comment from RGstar
Nicely done, my friend. Stark imagery indeed.
Nice couple of stanzas that coincide with each other as well as the main theme. Perfectly descriptive with a good aray of words creating a good poetic aura.
Nicely done.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Nicely done, my friend. Stark imagery indeed.
Nice couple of stanzas that coincide with each other as well as the main theme. Perfectly descriptive with a good aray of words creating a good poetic aura.
Nicely done.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Thank you RG.
Comment from Lesley Collier
A delightful poem of the sunrise over the water in the quiet morning with glowing light and the beautiful beginning of a brand new day. Well written with great format and the appreciation of a morning delight!
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A delightful poem of the sunrise over the water in the quiet morning with glowing light and the beautiful beginning of a brand new day. Well written with great format and the appreciation of a morning delight!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Thank you Lesley fir the review and those prescious stars.
Comment from I am Cat
Very pleasing, especially the rhymes... which take in the golden/horizon... leading to the glimmer/shimmer...
flanked by light/bright
and finally flanked outside (as it should be)
by sunrise/eyes
lovely to see, to feel on the face... shining through
the eyelids... a beautiful thing in the morning
(I don't see many unless I catch them coming around as I stay up too
late ... which DOES happen quite often, I might add)
I'm a night owl, and more often it's sunset which I see.
But I love the sunrise... and mostly when I'm by the ocean
I will see them, because the waves beckon me home.
:)
it's a good thing.
Well written... I was there.
Cat
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Very pleasing, especially the rhymes... which take in the golden/horizon... leading to the glimmer/shimmer...
flanked by light/bright
and finally flanked outside (as it should be)
by sunrise/eyes
lovely to see, to feel on the face... shining through
the eyelids... a beautiful thing in the morning
(I don't see many unless I catch them coming around as I stay up too
late ... which DOES happen quite often, I might add)
I'm a night owl, and more often it's sunset which I see.
But I love the sunrise... and mostly when I'm by the ocean
I will see them, because the waves beckon me home.
:)
it's a good thing.
Well written... I was there.
Cat
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Thank you Cat, for sharing my sunrise and this excellent review.
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a beautiful poem. There's nothing like the beauty of sunrise (or sunset) to take your breath away. A poem which bring peace to me today:) great cinquain form.
Teresa
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This is a beautiful poem. There's nothing like the beauty of sunrise (or sunset) to take your breath away. A poem which bring peace to me today:) great cinquain form.
Teresa
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Thank you Teresa. I knew i could do somehting with that photo. I appreciate the review and those stars.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Treischel: Your poem is so beautiful! I like the sequence of words and the mirror. The water shimmers and glimmers and glitters golden light. When I was in Painesville, MN, on a spiritual retreat, I saw the golden sunlight glow in the morning. I felt like I was inside the golden sunlight. I'm so glad you have fun with your family fishing and enjoying God's Glory! God bless! flylikeaneagle
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Treischel: Your poem is so beautiful! I like the sequence of words and the mirror. The water shimmers and glimmers and glitters golden light. When I was in Painesville, MN, on a spiritual retreat, I saw the golden sunlight glow in the morning. I felt like I was inside the golden sunlight. I'm so glad you have fun with your family fishing and enjoying God's Glory! God bless! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Thank you flylikeaneagle, that sounds delightful. Yes, we had a good time before the day became too hot, and we caught some fish too. Then released the,.
Comment from robina1978
Your photo is excellent and complements your poem perfectly. You made this mirror Cinquain very well, and made it rhyme as well. How nice it must have been to go fishing with your son and grandson.
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Your photo is excellent and complements your poem perfectly. You made this mirror Cinquain very well, and made it rhyme as well. How nice it must have been to go fishing with your son and grandson.
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Thank you Ine. It was a wonderful morning. An eagles nest was nearby, and the parents were busy feeding their young.
