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Get Well, Brooke!

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Writing for Brooke

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Comment from jmdg1954
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Valarie, I'm not sure if anyone could have said it better then you have.
So warm and heartfelt you left no stone unturned.

I think we all share these feelings for her. I'm writing a short Mango and Bert story for her. How do I post it to this book?

Thank you... John

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you so very much for your glowing comments. Go to the bottom of the post and you will see 'add a chapter' and click on it. It will allow you to add a poem (mine wasn't a poem but the book is dedicated to poetry) and just post what you want. I am sure Brooke will be delighted when she gets it.
reply by jmdg1954 on 29-May-2015
    Thank you.
Comment from jlsavell
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Valerie,

It matters not that you are not a poet, but you are an exceptional writer and you know how to express beautifully. Your philosophy during this trying time is quite inspiring as is our beautiful Brooke. Thank you for sharing..

jlsavell

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    No, I am not a poet but Brooke reviewed everything I wrote and was the inspiration that allowed me to finish my book. I am so pleased you liked what I wrote.
reply by jlsavell on 29-May-2015
    well that says it all. You are a fantastic writer and Brooke is one of the most inspiring, and encouraging and prolific person I know.
Comment from mermaids
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Love your words. They are eloquent and show strong feelings and emotions. I hope Brooke gets well and is able to return to poetry and aiding those of us who need help. I too, am always amazed at how much she reviews poems and prose. I am in awe of her and as a dandelion fanatic, I love her poems.

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    I pray she returns to us too. She is loved by so many and missed dearly.
Comment from marion
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A beautiful personal tribute to Brooke. I did not know she was unwell, as I'm only on and off Fanstory. I should have guessed, as she has reviewed all my work form the day I signed up to the site - all except my last four posts. I wondered where she was, thought perhaps she was on holiday, or just slowing down. She held such a tremendous workload on FS. All her poems inspired me, especially those on nature. And especially her children's poetry. Could you please update me on Brooke. Marion.

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    I don't know much more than she was recently diagnosed with severe aggressive MS and is currently in the hospital. She originally told me she was diagnosed with degenerative arthritis and was taking some time off. But finally Miranda sent a message thru the forum updating us on her mother's condition. Aggressive MS is the worst type you can get. It hits hard and fast and the prognosis is not good. Beyond that, I really don't know much more. I am so heartbroken over this. I truly love her as a friend and feel so helpless. I wish her all the best and pray that she will be able to return to us.
reply by marion on 29-May-2015
    Thanks, Sasha. I too wish her the best. M.
Comment from Joy Graham
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I love your message filled with sweet sentiment and fun memories. You made me cry. I miss her too, so understand completely what you're saying. I'm glad you included your message. It doesn't have to be a poem, all messages are perfect to let her know how much she means to us and how we miss her terribly.

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    I have read all the lovely poems and know she will be deeply moved by all of them.
Comment from reconciled
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HI Sasha, a wonderful letter to Brooke...I know this will win her heart...so nicely and beautifully written...could not have been said any better...God Bless...she will love it...Love Michael

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    I hope so. She has been a dear friend and I miss her terribly.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Well, Valerie. If this isn't one of the most genuine, heartfelt letters I've ever read from one member to another here, then I don't know what is. I think you echo the sentiments of most, if not all, of those of us who have come to know adewpearl, the poet, and Brooke, the caring, nurturing human being.

Wonderfully written. What more can I say than that?

~Dean

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you very much. It just breaks my heart knowing she and her family are going through such a horrific ordeal.
reply by Dean Kuch on 29-May-2015
    Mine too. In fact, I think we all feel the same.
Comment from angelface2
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this brought tears to my eyes, Sasha. I had an inkling that Brooke was sick as she had not been posting or reviewing. I do hope she can come back to us. You wrote a wonderful piece in honor of her and I enjoyed it and express much the same sentiments. Prayers for Brooke!! :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thank you very much. It just breaks my heart knowing she and her family are going through such a horrific ordeal.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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and is sometimes [is] the - lose redundant "is", Sasha

Brooke will love this, my friend - a message from your heart - we must all send positive thoughts to get her well again.

Margaret

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    Thanks for catching that. It doesn't seem to matter how many times I go over my writing, I always miss something.
Comment from Ulla
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Oh, this is lovely, and what a beautiful way of paying tribute to a person you obviously know and respect. I am beginning to understand that Brooke is quite a personality to the site and not at all well. I am sorry.
It is beautifully written. Ulla

 Comment Written 29-May-2015


reply by the author on 29-May-2015
    She has been number one since before I joined in 2008. I miss her terribly and pray she comes back to all of us.