Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Just2Write
She maybe [may be] yellow (Two words for may be vs. maybe)
I'm sure Brooke will love your beautiful tribute to dandelions and the Dandelions fairy - Brooke loves both.
I think your chapter number got mis-numbered. Only you can edit that - I think it should be 31 vs. 10,001.
Rose.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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She maybe [may be] yellow (Two words for may be vs. maybe)
I'm sure Brooke will love your beautiful tribute to dandelions and the Dandelions fairy - Brooke loves both.
I think your chapter number got mis-numbered. Only you can edit that - I think it should be 31 vs. 10,001.
Rose.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Thanks for your encouraging review and pointing out the mistake. Elaine
Comment from Sasha
Brooke is the only person that loved Dandelions more than I do. We often joked about it. She kindly allowed me to use her poem in my book, Celebrate the Danelions. I fear her illness is severe and she may not be able to return to us. I pray that I am wrong and that she gets better and comes back to write her beautiful poems for many more years.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Brooke is the only person that loved Dandelions more than I do. We often joked about it. She kindly allowed me to use her poem in my book, Celebrate the Danelions. I fear her illness is severe and she may not be able to return to us. I pray that I am wrong and that she gets better and comes back to write her beautiful poems for many more years.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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I hope she recovers and can return to us. Both Brooke and I love dandelions. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great poem. The picture is awesome. I like your words. Together the picture and words make a great poem message for Brooke. To me your poem is saying not only about the real dandelions but that Brooke is doing the same in human form. Good job and thanks for allowing me a chance to read your poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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This is a great poem. The picture is awesome. I like your words. Together the picture and words make a great poem message for Brooke. To me your poem is saying not only about the real dandelions but that Brooke is doing the same in human form. Good job and thanks for allowing me a chance to read your poem.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Joy Graham
I love the image this poem conjures up of the Dandelion Fairy :) Love the picture of an outbreak of dandelions. So pretty yet many go to war with them lol! I enjoyed your free verse poem. Brooke would love this.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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I love the image this poem conjures up of the Dandelion Fairy :) Love the picture of an outbreak of dandelions. So pretty yet many go to war with them lol! I enjoyed your free verse poem. Brooke would love this.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from lalajovanoski
I loved this poem. Very deep and emotional. Well composed and a great write. You are a very talented writer. Thank you very much for sharing this I truly enjoyed reading!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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I loved this poem. Very deep and emotional. Well composed and a great write. You are a very talented writer. Thank you very much for sharing this I truly enjoyed reading!
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Mark Schardine
I gather a dandelion-speckled meadow inspired these lines. Scattered here and there, immediately recognized, they make a pleasant sight for all of us.
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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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I gather a dandelion-speckled meadow inspired these lines. Scattered here and there, immediately recognized, they make a pleasant sight for all of us.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
