Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Yo! Whitey! What bad grammar! LOL. I write like that every time until someone on here corects it. That was a great yarn mate and I got a real kick out of it. Ten years that's so cool, good onya mateand good luck in the comp, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2015

Thanks, Fez. Bo and i appreciate your review! 8-)

Comment from donastell20

Excellent

A very nice story, well written, creative and imaginative. I enjoyed it from start to finish.

I thought it was very written.

Thanks

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks so much. 8-)

Comment from crowdog110

Excellent

I enjoyed this very much. Imaginative and good use of dialog; very well written, kept me interested to the end. Good luck!

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks. I appreciate your review! 8-)

Comment from jpduck

Excellent

Sounds like you certainly fell on your feet, Bo, and you have a powerful good way to write the 'Merican language. And o'course I forgive your little spellin' errors. But I ain't so sure 'bout you usin' your toot toots as a weapon. That's real bad.

Mongrel Adrian

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks so much for reviewing. Bo appreciates it too! 8-)

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Great contest entry, BG. I loved the story of Bo and how he came to be rescued and loved by his momma. Very imaginative approach, and your use of the colloquial dialogue seems perfect for this breed. Good luck in the contest!

:) Bev

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks Bev. Glad you liked Bo's story. 8-)

reply by Writingfundimension on 27-Feb-2015

You're welcome!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

effective use of vernacular speech
love the engaging narrative voice of this dog remembering the day he and his siblings were rescued from a box where they were unceremoniously dumped
I started my whinning - whining
love the dog's reminiscences of ten years of life with mamma, its ups and downs :-)
what a sweet relationship between human and dog in one loving family :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks so much, Brooke! 8-)

Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

I liked the way how you wrote this, boxergirl. I was a little confused at first but then I realised that you were writing from the point of view of a dog which I found intriguing having a dog myself. I couldn't find any faults. Good luck in the contest...Jacob

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks so much, Jacob. Glad you liked it 8-)

Comment from evilynne

Excellent

I think this piece is very funny, touching, and Bo's spelling and grammar are just what is needed to make the tale his. Best of luck to Bo and Mamma in the contest!

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

We both thank you very much. 8-)

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

HAHAHAHAHA!!! OMG, where're ma sixes when ah needs 'em? Yo sho is a cute lil' fella 'n youse all were good pups at a reel hard time, fo sho. Yu git yo just deeserts when yo's so good. Now win this heah contest, k? HAHAHAHA. (OMG - I'm lousy at this, but I guess you can see I loved it, eh Bo?)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Bo and I are so glad you liked our story! 8-)

reply by Dawn Munro on 28-Feb-2015

You're welcome. :)

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is such a cute story my friend. I wish I had some sixes left I really do. I love dog stories and Bo sounds like my Bandit. I loved reading about him. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2015

Thanks so much! 8-)