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Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Tom, this in the truest sense is sad - yet I know it happens for some reason, too often. Well penned, solid rhyme and flow - but still at the end the overall impact saddens me. Sometimes greed and materialistic need seems to be the greatest obstacle to get over.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Dear Tom, this in the truest sense is sad - yet I know it happens for some reason, too often. Well penned, solid rhyme and flow - but still at the end the overall impact saddens me. Sometimes greed and materialistic need seems to be the greatest obstacle to get over.
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Thank you Maureen. Yes it is sad, but happens too often.
