The Envy Of Eagles
15 Word Poem12 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
I love originality and this certainly meets that criteria.
The photo is superb and the words so aptly fit the image.
I do hope she had a parachute or a very soft bale of hay to land in.
A great entry
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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I love originality and this certainly meets that criteria.
The photo is superb and the words so aptly fit the image.
I do hope she had a parachute or a very soft bale of hay to land in.
A great entry
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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So pleased you enjoyed this. Thank you. I'm guessing she's "dreamed" up some way of landing. :)
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She probably never intends to land. The view from there must be amazing
Comment from Glasstruth
Very freely written, in that your lines move around free as an eagle. I don't really think an eagle would envy because I envy it, for its freedom and how it can soar sky high. Wonderfully written. Les
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Very freely written, in that your lines move around free as an eagle. I don't really think an eagle would envy because I envy it, for its freedom and how it can soar sky high. Wonderfully written. Les
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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How 'bout when it sees a rocket ship on its way to outer space? But, yes it would be a dream for almost all of us to just take off without any of the devices we have to invent. Thanks for the great review. :)
