His body etched..
Signed, sealed, and delivered.86 total reviews
Comment from HelenDeakin
This poem really speaks to me. The layout is presented well and the rhyming flows beautifuly. It is a very deep and meaningful poem and I can't see a way to fault it as I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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This poem really speaks to me. The layout is presented well and the rhyming flows beautifuly. It is a very deep and meaningful poem and I can't see a way to fault it as I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you Helen, for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Aussie
Where does it say in the Bible what Jesus looked like? I only have the King James version. You have written a good account of the Crucifixion of Our Lord. We live because he died for us. Let us give thanks everyday. Bless you, K.
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Where does it say in the Bible what Jesus looked like? I only have the King James version. You have written a good account of the Crucifixion of Our Lord. We live because he died for us. Let us give thanks everyday. Bless you, K.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Mary Magdalene didn't recognise him at first, at the tomb, John 20:11-17 His disciples didn't and on the road to Emmaus, Luke 24:13-35, thanks gpfor the great review and comments, Kay, blessings, Roy.
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They didn't recognise Him AFTER His death because He was in spiritual form (transitory state) and Thomas tried to touch him - Jesus told him "don't touch me, I have yet to ascend to My Father." XX K.
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I think He said it to Mary actually, John 20:17, He invited Thomas to put his hand in His side John 20:27, He ascended after 40 days Acts 1:9. I've changed it, Kay, it was a preaching I heard, and thought it was in scripture, blessings, Roy.
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Nobody's perfect, just forgiven. Love the Lord and we do. Listen to your heart. Blessings, K.
Comment from seaglass
This is a very nicely rhymed poem in tribute to the Savior's sacrifice. We will soon be in lent when our thoughts are drawn to this part of the Christian faith.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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This is a very nicely rhymed poem in tribute to the Savior's sacrifice. We will soon be in lent when our thoughts are drawn to this part of the Christian faith.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from rmj09
The focus of this poem what Jesus gave up for us. The storyline development He laid down his life for us alone. Carrying our sin and pain. His love for us compelled him so. His Father's creed guaranteed it. The rhythm carries us for word to word and gives it strength.
The line breaks give a natural pause.
Keep on writing.
Roy, so far today we've had 14inches of snow. Keep writing about our Lord. Walk in the shadow of God. *o* Rita
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The focus of this poem what Jesus gave up for us. The storyline development He laid down his life for us alone. Carrying our sin and pain. His love for us compelled him so. His Father's creed guaranteed it. The rhythm carries us for word to word and gives it strength.
The line breaks give a natural pause.
Keep on writing.
Roy, so far today we've had 14inches of snow. Keep writing about our Lord. Walk in the shadow of God. *o* Rita
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Wow 14 inches, when we where in NY in 2011, we had 16 inches, couldn't recognise cars, small mountains, don't have snow in Australia, in the mountains, yes, but not on plains. Thanks Rita for this most marvellous review, precious comments and stars, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Shadowfaxw
What a fitting poem to appear at Candlemas! I hope you keep getting reviews all the way til Easter!
You might want to see if you can find another picture that doesn't cover up the agony in his face with a watermark.
Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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What a fitting poem to appear at Candlemas! I hope you keep getting reviews all the way til Easter!
You might want to see if you can find another picture that doesn't cover up the agony in his face with a watermark.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from JudyS
Roy,
As always, a wonderful poem and message. Thank you so much for sharing this one with us. We all need to remember what Christ did for us. Well done. Have a great week. Judy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Roy,
As always, a wonderful poem and message. Thank you so much for sharing this one with us. We all need to remember what Christ did for us. Well done. Have a great week. Judy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you Judy, for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Oatmeal
Royowen,
Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth. Very informative and soulful, full of vivid impressions, effective and impressive.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Royowen,
Well chosen words are expressive. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. Your arrangement looks very nice. The flow is smooth. Very informative and soulful, full of vivid impressions, effective and impressive.
It is perfectly written and completely error free.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Quite a pause you give us for we must think of how we also appear to God and the Heavenly Host. The lash of time is there as we age. For His forgiveness, I hope we all get back part of our youth.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Quite a pause you give us for we must think of how we also appear to God and the Heavenly Host. The lash of time is there as we age. For His forgiveness, I hope we all get back part of our youth.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Just thanking you Alan, for the marvellous review and great comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Roy,
This is an absolutely beautiful poem and I enjoyed every word of it. You sure are a great poet. I'm giving you six stars even though I see that your work has already received the "All Time Best" award. Your poem is wonderful and written in perfect words that only you can write.
Kat
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Hi Roy,
This is an absolutely beautiful poem and I enjoyed every word of it. You sure are a great poet. I'm giving you six stars even though I see that your work has already received the "All Time Best" award. Your poem is wonderful and written in perfect words that only you can write.
Kat
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Thanks Kat for this uplifting and encouraging review, your comments are precious, bless you, my friend, Roy.
Comment from Shari1962
This is a well-written poem and a wonderful tribute to our Lord and Saviour, Christ Jesus. Having a son of my own, I am ever amazed that our Heavenly Father would give such a gift to humanity.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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This is a well-written poem and a wonderful tribute to our Lord and Saviour, Christ Jesus. Having a son of my own, I am ever amazed that our Heavenly Father would give such a gift to humanity.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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It's above understanding, could any of us sacrifice their Son for effectively our enemies! Amazing God, a love beyond understanding, thank you for this marvellous and precious review, blessings, Roy.
