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Comment from ravim
Your unique approach to the quatrain terrain is both creative and wonderful. I could sense the feel in your lines. The repetition does give some perspective to the poem as well. It was probably in the simplicity of the whole poem that I most regard it as beautiful.
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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Your unique approach to the quatrain terrain is both creative and wonderful. I could sense the feel in your lines. The repetition does give some perspective to the poem as well. It was probably in the simplicity of the whole poem that I most regard it as beautiful.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much for that very perceptive review.
Comment from Caressa_08
I really like the title, picture & poem that you presented...That are in unison & too the author notes..But very much dislike that bright, neon yellow background....Think you need to pick a warmer color, like a brownish tone or chestnut color....or even a deep beige, or something that depicts the colors of possibly, the Fall leaves.
Caressa
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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I really like the title, picture & poem that you presented...That are in unison & too the author notes..But very much dislike that bright, neon yellow background....Think you need to pick a warmer color, like a brownish tone or chestnut color....or even a deep beige, or something that depicts the colors of possibly, the Fall leaves.
Caressa
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much Caressa. I'll consider that.
