Reality Check
a pep talk in rhyme158 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
LITTLE BOYS LOVE TO CLIMB IT IS SECOND NATURE TO THEM THEY ARE SO FULL OF ENERGY THEY JUST HAVE TO BE ACTIVE TILL THEY WEAR THEMSELVES OUT
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
LITTLE BOYS LOVE TO CLIMB IT IS SECOND NATURE TO THEM THEY ARE SO FULL OF ENERGY THEY JUST HAVE TO BE ACTIVE TILL THEY WEAR THEMSELVES OUT
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Country ranch writer, I appreciate your thoughtful reviews :-) Brooke
Comment from seaglass
This message in short rhyme state a very true fact. There are no shortcuts to accomplish our goals and gain our success. Great picture to illustrate.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
This message in short rhyme state a very true fact. There are no shortcuts to accomplish our goals and gain our success. Great picture to illustrate.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, seaglass :-) Brooke
Comment from Caressa_08
Sawyer is getting his exercise in this poem which, you, his Grandma seems to be letting him know that he is on his own with this feat......Enjoyed the read with a wonderful picture that coincides.
Caressa
Sawyer is getting his exercise in this poem which, you, his Grandma seems to be letting him know that he is on his own with this feat......Enjoyed the read with a wonderful picture that coincides.
Caressa
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
His first ladder adventure? It never was a talent of mine. I would be so dizzy by the second rung I'd be in a panic. Sawyer a future fireman perhaps? Have a great weekend, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
His first ladder adventure? It never was a talent of mine. I would be so dizzy by the second rung I'd be in a panic. Sawyer a future fireman perhaps? Have a great weekend, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Debbie. No, he has been climbing all sorts of climbing structures for many months now - he just keeps getting more and more proficient :-) Brooke
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Reality Check' is extremely well-written. Short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
'Reality Check' is extremely well-written. Short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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duchess, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Brooke, as always you're very welcome
:-) the Duchess
Comment from Diny
Hiya Brooke! great to catch ya... I love anything with a superman theme- I saw a joke the other day that said the reason Superman isn't around anymore is because we took away all the phone booths! lol
Sweet write, sweet boy and sweet writer- as always, Diana
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
Hiya Brooke! great to catch ya... I love anything with a superman theme- I saw a joke the other day that said the reason Superman isn't around anymore is because we took away all the phone booths! lol
Sweet write, sweet boy and sweet writer- as always, Diana
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Diana, for your encouragement and gracious comments and generous stars :-) Brooke
Comment from Gracie619
Excellent! I have enjoyed your work in the past and this piece just made me smile. The message with the artwork is wonderful and heartwarming.
Excellent! I have enjoyed your work in the past and this piece just made me smile. The message with the artwork is wonderful and heartwarming.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I wanted to do a flip on the monkey bars and I got stuck. My friend came to try to help me but there was no way she could help me and I ended up falling on my butt. I know this predicament all too well.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
I wanted to do a flip on the monkey bars and I got stuck. My friend came to try to help me but there was no way she could help me and I ended up falling on my butt. I know this predicament all too well.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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ExperiencingLiphe, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from manicblue
I love your beautiful poem. Life truly is a matter of taking one step at a time, with determination to meet our goals, then starting the cycle again. You capture this so well in your poems.
I think of sweet Maureen these days. This sums up her will to live perfectly.
Lucretia xx
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
I love your beautiful poem. Life truly is a matter of taking one step at a time, with determination to meet our goals, then starting the cycle again. You capture this so well in your poems.
I think of sweet Maureen these days. This sums up her will to live perfectly.
Lucretia xx
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Lucretia, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Hi Brooke Such a cute little poem with a message in the words. It's wonderful that you have pictures of the milesones in your young grandson's life and wonderful for them that you are creating poems to go match up. I'm having a busy family weekend, my three sons and their families are visiting from Auckland (two hours from we have been living for the past eight years.) This time last year I was visiting my daughter and her family in Perth. (eight hours flight from Auckland)
Have a nice weekend Cheers Gaye
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
Hi Brooke Such a cute little poem with a message in the words. It's wonderful that you have pictures of the milesones in your young grandson's life and wonderful for them that you are creating poems to go match up. I'm having a busy family weekend, my three sons and their families are visiting from Auckland (two hours from we have been living for the past eight years.) This time last year I was visiting my daughter and her family in Perth. (eight hours flight from Auckland)
Have a nice weekend Cheers Gaye
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Gaye, thank you so much - that sounds like such a terrific family gathering :-) Have the best time ever :-) Brooke