Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

What lovely lyrics, Ine. I suppose you could easily dedicate this to yourself, with all you've been through lately, and Robert, of course!

I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.


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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Ine - This is a lovely love song which you have translated, I expect, from Dutch - although I don't know the song writer or the language I would say you appear to have made a very good translation of a lovely song of love. Kind regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like the romantic sentiments of these lyrics that you've translated into English
the song creates such an upbeat spirit
Brooke

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from Pili Pubul

Excellent

A very lovely song of love, very meaningful and romantic.
Sounds like a very happy woman that found true love, and
now she love life even more. Enjoy today. Pili

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

reply by Pili Pubul on 18-Aug-2014

You are most welcome. Have a good night. Pili

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

You make my life complete
Walking together hand-n-hand
I love you my loving man
You make life such a treat
As together we take our stand

Well done, Buck

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

I don't know if translations are considered to be creation, but I will give you the benefit of the doubt. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

reply by c_lucas on 18-Aug-2014

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

A well composed song lyric,. Yes everybody loves life especially when with someone that love and appreciate you. Nicely done work.

ola thomas

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from flamingstar

Average

Okay, I'm confused. It says song lyrics but I'm reading it as a poem and that's not really working for me. Some lines are very clumsy or awkward, such as "...but most times these butterflies went away again" and, "like it to be nice to you." I'm wondering if you meant to say, "But since I've KNOWN you, I have not had those yet" in line 6. The inconsistent verb tenses are distracting and your title doesn't seem to fit the piece. Is English your primary language?? Sorry to sound so harsh but it needs some grooming in my opinion.

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 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from Pyrrho

Good

I am poor one for reviewing lyrics because rough meter (like this one when read as a poem) is impossible for me to smooth out until I hear the music. Pity, I bet this one is much better sung.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine