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Comment from JonnyRhymes
Lovely work, and you touch on a wide range of aspects of poetry here. You have given a detailed and touching personal insight into what poetry means to you, well done indeed and thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Lovely work, and you touch on a wide range of aspects of poetry here. You have given a detailed and touching personal insight into what poetry means to you, well done indeed and thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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thank you jonny :)
Comment from Sasha
This is a superb entry for this contest. I enjoyed the entire poem and especially like this verse:
it just depends on the person
reading and writing to determine
what poetry means to them-
the flower or the stem....
I see this as a top contender in this contest and sincerely wish you all the best. I enjoyed this one immensely.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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This is a superb entry for this contest. I enjoyed the entire poem and especially like this verse:
it just depends on the person
reading and writing to determine
what poetry means to them-
the flower or the stem....
I see this as a top contender in this contest and sincerely wish you all the best. I enjoyed this one immensely.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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hope so lol! thanx smurphette :-)
Comment from Ritsal
I believe you've said it all here. It's probably one of your best to date and for that, here's a six. I don't know why I thought this was a poem of the month and not for a distant contest. It should be poem of the month!
Good luck, and Best wishes,
Rita
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I believe you've said it all here. It's probably one of your best to date and for that, here's a six. I don't know why I thought this was a poem of the month and not for a distant contest. It should be poem of the month!
Good luck, and Best wishes,
Rita
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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LOL! thank you rita :-)
Comment from TAB_that's me
I agree that poetry is the words one cannot hear. I think it is also the words not written - the hidden meanings within the words. Good luck in the contest:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I agree that poetry is the words one cannot hear. I think it is also the words not written - the hidden meanings within the words. Good luck in the contest:)
Teresa
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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thank you teresa :)
Comment from nomi338
I sometimes like to read a poem out loud. Sometimes I like to read a poem silently. I have not yet decided which is my favorite. I just know that the enjoyment is in the reading. Sometimes even when reading silently, the poem will resonate within me and rouse my attention just as strongly as if I were hearing it over a loudspeaker. These poems I like the best.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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I sometimes like to read a poem out loud. Sometimes I like to read a poem silently. I have not yet decided which is my favorite. I just know that the enjoyment is in the reading. Sometimes even when reading silently, the poem will resonate within me and rouse my attention just as strongly as if I were hearing it over a loudspeaker. These poems I like the best.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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so true! thank you nomi :)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Beautifully written with all the sentiments that a poem can convey. Your first stanza does tell us what poetry means to you. Then you have generalised to the point where you explain the effect poetry on some people, what poetry consists of etc. You do pick up again at the end with what poetry means to you - repeating some of your first stanza. A good read and Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Beautifully written with all the sentiments that a poem can convey. Your first stanza does tell us what poetry means to you. Then you have generalised to the point where you explain the effect poetry on some people, what poetry consists of etc. You do pick up again at the end with what poetry means to you - repeating some of your first stanza. A good read and Good Luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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thank you dorothy :)
Comment from Cedar
This is a very beautiful description of what poetry means to you. Your rhyming and presentation are both excellent. In reading your poem, I felt that poetry makes me also feel the same in many ways. Good luck to you. Bill
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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This is a very beautiful description of what poetry means to you. Your rhyming and presentation are both excellent. In reading your poem, I felt that poetry makes me also feel the same in many ways. Good luck to you. Bill
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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thank you bill :-)
Comment from seren james
Great poem Shelly. You have taken a good look at the subject, it is all so true about poetry the beautiful art of words. Yes, they are the words on paper when the voice dissappears. And how grateful are we for poets. I love your presentation.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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Great poem Shelly. You have taken a good look at the subject, it is all so true about poetry the beautiful art of words. Yes, they are the words on paper when the voice dissappears. And how grateful are we for poets. I love your presentation.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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thank you seren :)
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This was a lovely poem,showing all the different things poetry means to people, great wording, I loved the last stanza very much,great writing, I also loved,"the flower or the stem"
Andrew
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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This was a lovely poem,showing all the different things poetry means to people, great wording, I loved the last stanza very much,great writing, I also loved,"the flower or the stem"
Andrew
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
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thank you andrew :)
Comment from mfowler
This is a well written poem which covers just about everything I can think of about what people do with poetry. You've covered themes, topics, emotions and also styles. Interesting reading! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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This is a well written poem which covers just about everything I can think of about what people do with poetry. You've covered themes, topics, emotions and also styles. Interesting reading! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2014
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thank you m fowler :-)
