Comment from Lainee

Excellent

Pili this is such a deep and insightful look
at ones inner self. The flow of thoughts was
wonderful as was the peek into your world.

Goodluck,
Lainee :O)

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2005

Comment from Winbow

Excellent

All for the powers of discernment. Hey girl you do have that!
Once I read somewhere: "once you know the truth you die" made me think that one.
Lovely poem so honest, so pure and so humble. I think only great people can be humble. Those who are really in touch with their souls, like you.
Thanks
Desi

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2005

Comment from Permelia

Excellent

When you read this poem, it seems to bring peace and calmness to the soul. It is not only a lovely poem, but the photograph is one my sister would really like!.

I think sometimes the clouds are gathered over our head to help us when we are suffering the loss of a loved one.

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2005

Comment from Sissy

Excellent

I LOVE THIS!

First of all, it is so well written. Even when read aloud (I did this twice, I liked it so much), it runs smooth and easy.

Secondly, the pic you have above it is beautiful and the shape of the poem and colors only enhance how well it matches the artwork.

Excellent!

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005

Comment from smiles_with_sunshine

Excellent

>>>P>i>l>i>>P>u>b>u>l>>>

I have found it's our perceptions that form the clouds, because they are influenced by the "happenings" in our lives, which affect our reactions...each person's path to peace...to healing and wholeness, is uniquely different...no two people are exactly alike...there's no "one size fits all" formula, as some would have us believe...and that's why we are told not to judge......only Father (God) truly knows us, and only He can lead us back to His heart, where peace lives and has it's being....A wonderfully liberating poem...filled with timely and timeless wisdom for all who desire to walk and live in Truth...Thank you, Pili, for sharing another piece of your heart and soul with us/me...I was blessed. Take care and "BE" blessed.
:)s* smiles

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005

Comment from Dreamdancer

Excellent

Hi Miss P,
Very inspirational... the flow and imagery of the piece is mellowing-- a calming effect upon the reader:-) Great read! Buddy

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005

Comment from Elizabeth Clark

Excellent

[ Ok, I really am convinced that you are my physical Guardian Angel]
I felt this pull so many strings within me. I have been stressed all day and this poem, excellant by the way, reminded me I have to pray and ground my emotions today. Mary

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005

Comment from Diny

Excellent

bathing my mind
with its light.

Great line!

Let my soul
arrive
to shores
of calmness,

I just did that! this weekend Got away and refreshed!


Not too sure if I meditated enough to be full of such wisdom as you
But it reminded me how good it was to get away
A perfect piece to read after a short vacation!
Write on
Diny

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005

Comment from passions4life

Excellent

Pili,

The peace that flows in this piece
is beauty in itself
within
to bring forth a feeling
a calmness within
my
heart.

Well done. =)

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005

Comment from Mrs Jones

Excellent

Perfect Pili. Good line breaks and great words.
"to distinguish
without doubt
all that is false,
and the wisdom
to never
reject
truth."
Cheers

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005