An April shower of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The promise"a challenge of a poem a day for a month
22 total reviews
Comment from Petriesan
I think it is spelled "Hibernation"
very cool picture you chose
you love the rainbows after the storms blow eastward. Me too
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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I think it is spelled "Hibernation"
very cool picture you chose
you love the rainbows after the storms blow eastward. Me too
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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I will check on the edit, thank you for mentioning. Glad you enjoyed The promise . :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
What a beautiful picture and I love the poem. Looks like a lovely spring day. How nice. Good job. It is warming up some now. Not much sun yet, today. But it will come. LOL> Miss Sally
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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What a beautiful picture and I love the poem. Looks like a lovely spring day. How nice. Good job. It is warming up some now. Not much sun yet, today. But it will come. LOL> Miss Sally
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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All too soon we will be talking about the 'unbearable' heat. LOL Spring will turn into summer a lot quicker than winter turned into spring. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
What a beautiful poem for a fine Spring morning. We had severe thunderstorm last night, this morning the birds are singing. God is so good to us. All that we're missing in your rainbow. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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What a beautiful poem for a fine Spring morning. We had severe thunderstorm last night, this morning the birds are singing. God is so good to us. All that we're missing in your rainbow. Have a great day.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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It seems to be the tornado and thunderstorm time of year. I am so glad you enjoyed The promise, hopefully you will see a rainbow soon. :-) Carolyn
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That would be beautiful.
Comment from wordsmatter2me
It's looks the promises of Mother Nature from the inspired Words of God, that the light of day provides us with the best of the Spring season. I love the picture for I can soon visualize the joy of the morning view of rainbows, plants and animals created by God. I enjoy reading your poetry in honor of April National Poetry Month.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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It's looks the promises of Mother Nature from the inspired Words of God, that the light of day provides us with the best of the Spring season. I love the picture for I can soon visualize the joy of the morning view of rainbows, plants and animals created by God. I enjoy reading your poetry in honor of April National Poetry Month.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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You are so kind. I enjoy your reviews very much. Thank you, Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
You are spoiling us readers.. Now every morning when I go to work I look forward to your daily poem, and without disappointment, I may add.
Hybernation's ended
Woodchucks wakin' up
All regarding spring is waking up, finally!
Nicely done, Carolyn! John
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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You are spoiling us readers.. Now every morning when I go to work I look forward to your daily poem, and without disappointment, I may add.
Hybernation's ended
Woodchucks wakin' up
All regarding spring is waking up, finally!
Nicely done, Carolyn! John
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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I am pleased you are liking these John, I am having a good time with them. Have a great day, see ya tomorrow. Love, Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, carolyn, this is a beautiful quatrain poem about the covenant God created with Noah and sealed with a rainbow. i enjoyed reading this one...
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this is very well written, carolyn, this is a beautiful quatrain poem about the covenant God created with Noah and sealed with a rainbow. i enjoyed reading this one...
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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It is wonderful that so many of you understand the promise. God is good, :-) Carolyn
Comment from royowen
Written in beautiful language, as you normally would, still on the beauty of spring and bountiful harvest! The descriptive text is good, the meter nice and even, the rhyme scheme good! Good one, again, Carolyn. Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Written in beautiful language, as you normally would, still on the beauty of spring and bountiful harvest! The descriptive text is good, the meter nice and even, the rhyme scheme good! Good one, again, Carolyn. Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Blessings back to you Roy. I am happy you are enjoying this series. I still have a lot to go. :-) Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem with great rhyming. The picture is so pretty too. Everything goes together so well. I look forward to you next poem.
Kat
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a beautiful poem with great rhyming. The picture is so pretty too. Everything goes together so well. I look forward to you next poem.
Kat
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Hi Kat, and thanks for your kind comments. See ya tomorrow with another one. Love, Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful poem from the author in this piece of writing. The picture adds to the setting and enhances the emotions and makes this a complete experience for the reader here.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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This is a beautiful poem from the author in this piece of writing. The picture adds to the setting and enhances the emotions and makes this a complete experience for the reader here.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Thanks Tom, I appreciate you wonderful comments. (I am behind in reviews, wonder why, but will catch up soon.) Have a great week, Carolyn
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Take care.
Comment from JB Lynn
Another good one, here. I like that your last line could either be referring to the renewed promise in the rainbow, or it could be interpreted as all the renewed signs of spring come back "fresh" just for me and you.
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Another good one, here. I like that your last line could either be referring to the renewed promise in the rainbow, or it could be interpreted as all the renewed signs of spring come back "fresh" just for me and you.
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Both ways are intended, however, heavy emphasis on God's word and promises are 'fresh' throughout the ages. So happy you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn
