Savannah Love
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Comment from N.K. Wagner
I wonder if Billy Joe is joking or if there's an underground stream in the tunnel somewhere. But if there is, why did Chase need the water? I'll have to hold my questions until this part resolves. There's too much going on for such a short post, but not for a normal length chapter. :) nancy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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I wonder if Billy Joe is joking or if there's an underground stream in the tunnel somewhere. But if there is, why did Chase need the water? I'll have to hold my questions until this part resolves. There's too much going on for such a short post, but not for a normal length chapter. :) nancy
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from cory4
Dear Barbara,
I love your chapter, i have just read. You have written this chapter extremely well. The story is very interesting. Your writing is excellent. The dialogue is great! Keep writing. I am waiting to see how the story will turn out. I hope it all works out for the main characters, such as Amos for example. I hope they find what their looking for in the end. Overall a fantastic story. Well done!
Kind Regards,
Cory4
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Dear Barbara,
I love your chapter, i have just read. You have written this chapter extremely well. The story is very interesting. Your writing is excellent. The dialogue is great! Keep writing. I am waiting to see how the story will turn out. I hope it all works out for the main characters, such as Amos for example. I hope they find what their looking for in the end. Overall a fantastic story. Well done!
Kind Regards,
Cory4
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Very good chapter and full of suspense that holds my attention. I'm eager to read more. I hope you are doing well. It has been awhile and I have missed your fine writing.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Very good chapter and full of suspense that holds my attention. I'm eager to read more. I hope you are doing well. It has been awhile and I have missed your fine writing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from lindalcreel
I lived in Maryland and had the pleasure of being inside some of those old homes that had hidden exits. Kind of a great part of history to know what happened behind those walls. Great read. I hope they find Paige soon.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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I lived in Maryland and had the pleasure of being inside some of those old homes that had hidden exits. Kind of a great part of history to know what happened behind those walls. Great read. I hope they find Paige soon.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from emrpoems
Good story plan and development allowing it to flow at a steady pace.
good use of dialogue.
you have used your imagination and displayed a lot of intrigue
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Good story plan and development allowing it to flow at a steady pace.
good use of dialogue.
you have used your imagination and displayed a lot of intrigue
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from rtobaygo
Hello:
You could cut the tension with a knife and feel the anxiety.
The accents used added to the southern atmosphere and the imagery made one feel as they were too, in the tunnel.
Take care,
Ray
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Hello:
You could cut the tension with a knife and feel the anxiety.
The accents used added to the southern atmosphere and the imagery made one feel as they were too, in the tunnel.
Take care,
Ray
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good opening lines that raise my curiosity when the guy holds up Paige's shoe. I'm kind of mad at myself because I missed a lot of what's going on. The dialogue is clear. The transition is smooth as this piece makes me feel that I'm searching for Paige too. Good job and I will not try to get lost any more.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Good opening lines that raise my curiosity when the guy holds up Paige's shoe. I'm kind of mad at myself because I missed a lot of what's going on. The dialogue is clear. The transition is smooth as this piece makes me feel that I'm searching for Paige too. Good job and I will not try to get lost any more.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from JavaJunkie
I can see the value of your writing even with just this chapter, what is it ...chapter 90! I think your dialogue is good and you capture the dialect well with Amos. He's a funny character. I wonder if you ever get stuck think'n in hick!?!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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I can see the value of your writing even with just this chapter, what is it ...chapter 90! I think your dialogue is good and you capture the dialect well with Amos. He's a funny character. I wonder if you ever get stuck think'n in hick!?!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from AprilShower
This is short, Barbara. I'm anxious to read more. Not a whole lot has happened this part of the chapter.
I didn't notice anything to bring to your attention.
I hope Paige wasn't hit by rocks.
April
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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This is short, Barbara. I'm anxious to read more. Not a whole lot has happened this part of the chapter.
I didn't notice anything to bring to your attention.
I hope Paige wasn't hit by rocks.
April
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
Comment from kiwijenny
This is a very interesting chapter....It kept me intrigued....the dialogue keeps it believable,...it was great exploring tunnels used to free slaves long ago.....that ghost has seen some amazing things.....found Paige's shoe and heard Morgan bark....leaves us intrigued ...
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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This is a very interesting chapter....It kept me intrigued....the dialogue keeps it believable,...it was great exploring tunnels used to free slaves long ago.....that ghost has seen some amazing things.....found Paige's shoe and heard Morgan bark....leaves us intrigued ...
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and I am sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I was out of state for a while.
