Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi robina, I think knowingly or unknowingly I believe you have a great song here. I believe it was written from experience and from a a woman of substance.

well done Mary

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from fairy77

Excellent

That was inspiring and well done:)Great song lyrics and it was really a pleasure to review:)I liked persevere and the found it fun! beth fairy77.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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Comment from Ronni

Excellent

The dedication to 'perseverenc' in this poem is
most compelling and accentuates the bond of love
between two lovers, vividly enhanced by great photo.
Thanks for sharing...best always Ronni

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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Comment from twinklepoems

Excellent

I think that you are someone who preservers, with your health, with your writing and with your spirit! I take it this was a war song. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I could hear your song being song and enjoyed the many repeats. Your "speechless night" image is quite evocative too. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, we will persevere come hail or high water...very well written...you did a great write on this...and picture perfect...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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reply by l.raven on 25-Feb-2014

You are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from Idamarty

Excellent

Hi Ine,

Absolutely loved this poem about perseverance no matter what may come. You have persevered through many things in your life and you will do so again. This reads like a song and it would, I am sure, inspire anyone who heard it. Thanks so much for sharing...blessings.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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Comment from misscookie

Excellent

These are some strong powerful word.
They caught my attention from the start. Your words are so emotional that they truly touched my heart.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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reply by misscookie on 25-Feb-2014

You're very welcome, until next time.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is lovely. We will persevere is such a strong statement. There is a desire to prevail, even against all odds. You mention uncertain times, being in a bomb shelter, surviving a hurricane. To get through these crises and be with loved ones is a great motivator. Well stated, and the flow does go like a song. judi

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Dear Ine,

Knowing what's going on in your life at present, makes this song (I'm assuming it's a song - I can 'hear' the accompanying music) all the more powerful.

The repetition of "We will persevered" packs a powerful punch that will not be argued with.

God bless you, my friend.

Thinking of you,

Love,

xxx

Sonali :)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014

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