Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Chapter 10, part 3"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
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Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
I haven't read your previous posts, so I will just base my review on this one. Your writing is flawless, my friend, and your characters are well-developed through their dialog. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I haven't read your previous posts, so I will just base my review on this one. Your writing is flawless, my friend, and your characters are well-developed through their dialog. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CR Delport
Morgan should have pee'd on the feet of the two old bitties. Good for Cash standing up to them. Another interesting chapter that is well written and makes for a good read.
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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Morgan should have pee'd on the feet of the two old bitties. Good for Cash standing up to them. Another interesting chapter that is well written and makes for a good read.
Comment Written 01-May-2013
reply by the author on 01-May-2013
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I actually thought about Morgan doing that, but decided that would have been a little over the hill Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from EmberSnowcat
Just as good as part two! I was really hoping that puppy would have taken a nip at the old biddy's ankles LOL. That poor puppy. I am really interested in your story. I love the build up you gave in this chapter with the heirs and the wills. I bet it is going to get even better in the next chapter! I can't wait for the next part! Wonderful job!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Just as good as part two! I was really hoping that puppy would have taken a nip at the old biddy's ankles LOL. That poor puppy. I am really interested in your story. I love the build up you gave in this chapter with the heirs and the wills. I bet it is going to get even better in the next chapter! I can't wait for the next part! Wonderful job!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Interesting turn of events. I'm a little surprised that Paige would be so willing just to hand the house over. However, I'm pretty sure we're not done yet! There's some spooky stuff to figure out.
Good post, Barbara. Just one wee thing:
"Has there been problems?" - "Have there been problems?"
Av
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Interesting turn of events. I'm a little surprised that Paige would be so willing just to hand the house over. However, I'm pretty sure we're not done yet! There's some spooky stuff to figure out.
Good post, Barbara. Just one wee thing:
"Has there been problems?" - "Have there been problems?"
Av
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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It is in dialogue. In the South they are not so great at their grammar. That is why I have has and not have. I will revisit it. Thank you for the kind review.
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Ah! I see. Sorry, Barbara, I didn't realize. I'm from a part of the world where there's a very strong dialect, so I get what you're saying.
Comment from emjaihammond
I enjoyed reading this continuation of your story. Its gradually leading up to something important, I can feel it. Have missed some, and will have to go back and catch up. Thanks for the intriguing story line. I do enjoy this one.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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I enjoyed reading this continuation of your story. Its gradually leading up to something important, I can feel it. Have missed some, and will have to go back and catch up. Thanks for the intriguing story line. I do enjoy this one.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
So there's something in the Bookman line that Paige doesn't know about. Is Paige a direct descendant without knowing it? Of course, one can't entail property like that without lots of official paperwork. An interesting development. :) nancy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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So there's something in the Bookman line that Paige doesn't know about. Is Paige a direct descendant without knowing it? Of course, one can't entail property like that without lots of official paperwork. An interesting development. :) nancy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from JesusLuvsU
Great story! It is interesting and reaches the reader profoundly! The only thing I would change would be that in some places it was difficult to keep up with. But other than that it was a great scene that was created and I definitely admire your work.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Great story! It is interesting and reaches the reader profoundly! The only thing I would change would be that in some places it was difficult to keep up with. But other than that it was a great scene that was created and I definitely admire your work.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. God Bless
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
The plot just keeps getting thicker. I wonder if Redman knows more than he is telling Cash and Paige? Ethel and Beatrice are a piece of work. I love the picture of Morgan and I can't imagine anyone being means to him. Apparently Ethel could. I hope the fingerprints Cash sent to a P.I. will actually tell them who the culprit is that has been harassing Paige. Now it seems someone doesn't think Paige is a true Bookman. Great chapter! Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Hi Barbara,
The plot just keeps getting thicker. I wonder if Redman knows more than he is telling Cash and Paige? Ethel and Beatrice are a piece of work. I love the picture of Morgan and I can't imagine anyone being means to him. Apparently Ethel could. I hope the fingerprints Cash sent to a P.I. will actually tell them who the culprit is that has been harassing Paige. Now it seems someone doesn't think Paige is a true Bookman. Great chapter! Blessings, chey
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Paige isn't a true Bookman. Her aunt married a Bookman. She inherited the house from them.
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I see...I hope they don't take the house away from Paige...
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
All the trouble she's had and now someone's contesting the will. Thank goodness she has friends so she doesn't have to go through this new problem alone.
Oh, can I have the puppy.... Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease.
After Cash[,] nodded, Billy Joe grinned - lose comma
done gettin(') things - add
Documentation (of) the house - add
a most impressive write, Barbara. I'm so enjoying this story.
Margaret
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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All the trouble she's had and now someone's contesting the will. Thank goodness she has friends so she doesn't have to go through this new problem alone.
Oh, can I have the puppy.... Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease.
After Cash[,] nodded, Billy Joe grinned - lose comma
done gettin(') things - add
Documentation (of) the house - add
a most impressive write, Barbara. I'm so enjoying this story.
Margaret
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the eagle eye. I appreciate both.
Comment from unimatrix001
Alan never said who contested the will. This is important information Paige and Cash wouldn't let go.
Bonnie Bookman, last decendant of George Bookman, marries into the feuding Walker family. That's a story in and of itself.
Documentation the house has to stay in the Bookman line - You're missing a word here, not sure which.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Alan never said who contested the will. This is important information Paige and Cash wouldn't let go.
Bonnie Bookman, last decendant of George Bookman, marries into the feuding Walker family. That's a story in and of itself.
Documentation the house has to stay in the Bookman line - You're missing a word here, not sure which.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the eagle eye. I have made the correction.
