Savannah Love
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Comment from oliviastjames
I haven't had the pleasure of reading the previous chapters but I have to say that you are very talented. This was an extraordinarily written chapter. It held my interest and left me wanting to know more. I wish you all the best with this book and look forward to going back and reading your other posts.
Happy writing!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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I haven't had the pleasure of reading the previous chapters but I have to say that you are very talented. This was an extraordinarily written chapter. It held my interest and left me wanting to know more. I wish you all the best with this book and look forward to going back and reading your other posts.
Happy writing!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
I have relatives that fought in the Revolutionary War (on both sides...lol). This is a fascinating chapter that leaves the reader wondering what the ladies actually wanted. They clearly did not want to talk about the Chicago Board of Trade. Excellent work with this one and I anxiously look forward to reading the next chapter.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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I have relatives that fought in the Revolutionary War (on both sides...lol). This is a fascinating chapter that leaves the reader wondering what the ladies actually wanted. They clearly did not want to talk about the Chicago Board of Trade. Excellent work with this one and I anxiously look forward to reading the next chapter.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Sounds like Paige has seen off the pair of biddies at least, I don't like their sort at all. Puffed up, pretentious and, frankly, common as dirt, but putting on the airs and graces. As for the doctor they are related too ...
Nicely written, I liked the way Paige held her own there, but I suspect more trouble is brewing now.
Patrick
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Hi Barbara,
Sounds like Paige has seen off the pair of biddies at least, I don't like their sort at all. Puffed up, pretentious and, frankly, common as dirt, but putting on the airs and graces. As for the doctor they are related too ...
Nicely written, I liked the way Paige held her own there, but I suspect more trouble is brewing now.
Patrick
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Paige can hold her own. Cash just hasn't realized it yet.
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According to my dictionary it is a short form of "thingamebob" - another nice one to play with.
Patrick
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Sorry, Barbara, that last reply was not to your comment - I got confucious ...
Patrick
Comment from Norbanus
Delightful blue-berry muffins I made me hungry. I gotta go to the kitchen and see if I can stir up a batch. BTW--I didn't see any opportunities for improvement.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Delightful blue-berry muffins I made me hungry. I gotta go to the kitchen and see if I can stir up a batch. BTW--I didn't see any opportunities for improvement.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouragment.
Comment from rheabug
This was a great chapter in your ongoing book. I love to hear of the ladies of the south. Everything played out as it should completing a nice scene. God Bless, Linda
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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This was a great chapter in your ongoing book. I love to hear of the ladies of the south. Everything played out as it should completing a nice scene. God Bless, Linda
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
WOW Barbara! Wonderful chapter, so rich in American History. Very educational. I like how the story flows and kept me interested. As always, very good dialogue.
GREAT JOB!
:)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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WOW Barbara! Wonderful chapter, so rich in American History. Very educational. I like how the story flows and kept me interested. As always, very good dialogue.
GREAT JOB!
:)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Bryana
large planation - large plantation (finger error)
I thought the daughters of the revolution were just a patriotic memory but it seems that they still keep track of them.
I like this chapter, well written about the visit of these people. Now I'm curious about the date book, does it really exist? I'll wait for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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large planation - large plantation (finger error)
I thought the daughters of the revolution were just a patriotic memory but it seems that they still keep track of them.
I like this chapter, well written about the visit of these people. Now I'm curious about the date book, does it really exist? I'll wait for the next chapter.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I will fix that error. Thank you for catching it.
Comment from Jade Lawson
Hi, although I haven't read the previous chapters, this kept me interested,. I liked the way the story flows, the dialogue. Elements such as amusing and entertaining I found in here.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Hi, although I haven't read the previous chapters, this kept me interested,. I liked the way the story flows, the dialogue. Elements such as amusing and entertaining I found in here.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara.
This sentence sounds a little awkward:
The lady without the cane eyebrows rose. (Better?: The eyebrows of the lady without the cane rose.)
The ladies stared at each other before,(no comma) Ethel said,
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Good chapter, Barbara.
This sentence sounds a little awkward:
The lady without the cane eyebrows rose. (Better?: The eyebrows of the lady without the cane rose.)
The ladies stared at each other before,(no comma) Ethel said,
Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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I had the sentence the previous way to start and was told to write it this way. I will go back. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ...
For me, your story has taken an unexpected turn and one which will probably lead to some interesting developments.
There is just one small change to recommend ...
* You have - The ladies stared at each other before, Ethel said, "Our grandson's Dwayne .... You do not need a comma after the word before ...
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ...
For me, your story has taken an unexpected turn and one which will probably lead to some interesting developments.
There is just one small change to recommend ...
* You have - The ladies stared at each other before, Ethel said, "Our grandson's Dwayne .... You do not need a comma after the word before ...
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your eagle eye.
