A swim
Free verse19 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very saucy poem very well written and I enjoyed reading it I liked the fact there was no picture and it left everything to the imagination lol thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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This is a very saucy poem very well written and I enjoyed reading it I liked the fact there was no picture and it left everything to the imagination lol thank you for sharing
Comment Written 20-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thank you!
Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Allison
This poetry transports the reader to a chilly and loving
moment. The lake was chilly and the loving was HOT. It
held my interest from start to finish. No photo is
necessary; your words are ample. Thank You for your
creation.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Well Done ~ Allison
This poetry transports the reader to a chilly and loving
moment. The lake was chilly and the loving was HOT. It
held my interest from start to finish. No photo is
necessary; your words are ample. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the great review!!
Comment from rtobaygo
Good read with an inference at the end of more passion to come. As I said before and will undoubtedly say again, your minimalistic style generates a maximum interpretation by the reader. Well done!.
take care,
Ray
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Good read with an inference at the end of more passion to come. As I said before and will undoubtedly say again, your minimalistic style generates a maximum interpretation by the reader. Well done!.
take care,
Ray
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Thank you, I love that compliment!
Comment from Lisa Charlie
Sexy ending to a rather nice little poem!
The poem flowed well and kept my interest. It was easy to follow. The ending was a nice little curve to what seemed very innocent in the beginning.
I enjoyed reading! Nice write!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Sexy ending to a rather nice little poem!
The poem flowed well and kept my interest. It was easy to follow. The ending was a nice little curve to what seemed very innocent in the beginning.
I enjoyed reading! Nice write!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Thank you!!
Comment from Lise Deangelo
I enjoyed reading this poem, Alison. I like the detail of the sharp rocks on the soft feet. It is nice to get warm again after an evening swim. Thanks so much for sharing :) Lise
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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I enjoyed reading this poem, Alison. I like the detail of the sharp rocks on the soft feet. It is nice to get warm again after an evening swim. Thanks so much for sharing :) Lise
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Thank you!!
Comment from Carole Rosa
Allison, Your poem is fine, but it doesn't have a style or enthusiasm. It's kind of bland. I give you five stars because you a have written a poem that is easy to understand. It's a bit like a prose in a poem. Carole
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Allison, Your poem is fine, but it doesn't have a style or enthusiasm. It's kind of bland. I give you five stars because you a have written a poem that is easy to understand. It's a bit like a prose in a poem. Carole
Comment Written 18-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from V Hearn
Very good. Spontaneous love and passion can come at any time. The ending is short and to the point leaving the reader to use their imagination. Very nice.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Very good. Spontaneous love and passion can come at any time. The ending is short and to the point leaving the reader to use their imagination. Very nice.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much!
Comment from lorijean
A great little poem about the swim in the chilly lake, and the feeling of wanting to get warm again as the sun goes down....
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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A great little poem about the swim in the chilly lake, and the feeling of wanting to get warm again as the sun goes down....
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you! !
Comment from CR Delport
You create a very nice romantic scene. I could picture it. This poem is well written and very descriptive. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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You create a very nice romantic scene. I could picture it. This poem is well written and very descriptive. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much!
