Comment from BeccaInaDaffydill

Excellent

You really got the thrill of it down! Our town finally got a casino a few years ago, and my hubby and I try to go every other month. If we win or loose, it ends up evening out the next time! And who doesn't love the sound, even if it's not you, of someone getting a payoff? Yay, money!
Oh, I should mentioned that I liked the poem hehe. The rhyming scheme really worked, as did the short phrasing.
Good luck in Vegas!

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013

Thanks Beccainadaffydill. I usually try twice a month. It is so fun when you win.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Hey friend this poem has a nice ring as Ka-ching goes into the slots. It sounds like you two have a good time with it and not go overboard. Nothing is cheap these days.

I've never been to Vegas so remember to take pictures to show to all your fans.

Great poem here. I am presuming that if we don't hear from you again it means you've hit the Jackpot.

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013

Thanks Gloria. I'll definitely take photographs.

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

I love Vegas too. I set a limit and just had fun. My son that died won $10,000 more than once. Good piece, I haven't been in years. God loves you and so do I/

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013

Thank you Evelyn. Great story.

Comment from Patricia1

Excellent

I like this light hearted poem about having a little fun! Ka-ching would be an exciting sound to hear. Of course Ka-ching, Ka-ching, Ka-ching and on and on would be even better! Your right a lot of the things a person would like to do is costly so I guess it's a matter of preference for each person. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013

Thank you Patricia.

Comment from Sam Mendonca

Excellent

Enjoyed your poem very much it brought
back some fun times when I won $2,734.00
The image is great for the poem
Great job ;)

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013

Thank you Sam. Those are fun moments.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahahahaha! I loved this quirky little number, very well written and flowed along nicely. Good luck on the trip, i hope you win. Cheers Fez.

 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013

Thanks much Fez.

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Hey, I think this is a great little poem and your author notes are terrific. I 'm not a casino fan but I have friends who say the same thing. Can no longer afford sports. So ka-ching, here we come. :-o Carolyn

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 Comment Written 08-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013

Thanks notesandmore. The key is holding your budget, so you don't end up mortgaging the house or robbing banks.