I Knew It!
Psst! Ever tried to catch a fairy?61 total reviews
Comment from alexisleech
I am so glad I had a six left to give this. It was a beautifully written, enchanting story, and one that will bring a few tears. I did exactly the same thing for my daughter using two cardboard cut-outs of tiny feet with cocktail sticks inserted to guide them so I could have the footprints coming from the window ledge. Her amazement and delight the next morning, is one of the most memorable images of her childhood I have in my head.
You have captured it all so well. Thank you so much for reminding me.
Alexis x
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
I am so glad I had a six left to give this. It was a beautifully written, enchanting story, and one that will bring a few tears. I did exactly the same thing for my daughter using two cardboard cut-outs of tiny feet with cocktail sticks inserted to guide them so I could have the footprints coming from the window ledge. Her amazement and delight the next morning, is one of the most memorable images of her childhood I have in my head.
You have captured it all so well. Thank you so much for reminding me.
Alexis x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Bless you, Alexis ... aaah, a trickster at heart also, hmm? A special thank you for your lovely '6' - so glad you saved one for me!!! Goes with early morning coffee :)))))))))) Sharyn
Comment from Enrique28
This is indeed a wonderful little write that kept my interest from beginning to end. A fine depiction of innocence romanticized by an all important element of love. Superbly written with an excellent mixture of dialogue and narrative that conveys the nature of your two main characters brilliantly. I love the way you express how relationship can be conducive to happiness. Great work!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
This is indeed a wonderful little write that kept my interest from beginning to end. A fine depiction of innocence romanticized by an all important element of love. Superbly written with an excellent mixture of dialogue and narrative that conveys the nature of your two main characters brilliantly. I love the way you express how relationship can be conducive to happiness. Great work!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much, Enrique! And special blessings for a magic '6' my dear - so glad you enjoyed my piece.
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from jjstar
Oh, what a breathtaking, beautiful, heartfelt story. It's a masterpiece. I don't know what to say except you've captured the exquisite spirits of a seven year old, which brings a light to anyone around them, the grandfather waiting to rejoin his Nell, and the magic of not only their relationship, but the grandfather's abiding love for his wife. I had to stop highlighting because I was so entranced by the story. It was simply magnificent.
For some, the dirty little secret was too private, it could not be shared. For others the secret was something that freed their spirits and liberated their souls.===ahhhhhh...how sweet!
Her Big Secret - like her first tooth - was out.===huge deal..a rite of passage..:)
What happened? Should I call the police?"===great response!
Her" Fairyland was a deeply shaded, distant corner of their large Australian garden full of giant eucalypts and scented yellow puff-balls of wattle. This particular corner, though, was home to an old, twisted and rather brittle Poinciana ===what a beautiful description...
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
Oh, what a breathtaking, beautiful, heartfelt story. It's a masterpiece. I don't know what to say except you've captured the exquisite spirits of a seven year old, which brings a light to anyone around them, the grandfather waiting to rejoin his Nell, and the magic of not only their relationship, but the grandfather's abiding love for his wife. I had to stop highlighting because I was so entranced by the story. It was simply magnificent.
For some, the dirty little secret was too private, it could not be shared. For others the secret was something that freed their spirits and liberated their souls.===ahhhhhh...how sweet!
Her Big Secret - like her first tooth - was out.===huge deal..a rite of passage..:)
What happened? Should I call the police?"===great response!
Her" Fairyland was a deeply shaded, distant corner of their large Australian garden full of giant eucalypts and scented yellow puff-balls of wattle. This particular corner, though, was home to an old, twisted and rather brittle Poinciana ===what a beautiful description...
Comment Written 30-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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Bless you jj! I'm so glad you resonated with this piece - I really enjoyed writing it. I don't think of myself as a story-writer, so it's a stretch of my writing muscles - so very happy that it turned out well. And a special big 'thank you' for your lovely '6' my dear!
hugs
Sharyn
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You are so welcome...so incredible!
Comment from katie tipton
This is an excellent story! I think you have really captured a little girl's love of mythical creatures, and a grandparent's love for their grandchild. Great job!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
This is an excellent story! I think you have really captured a little girl's love of mythical creatures, and a grandparent's love for their grandchild. Great job!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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thx so much Katie - so glad you enjoyed my tale! :) Sharyh
Comment from nomi338
This truly beautiful, wonderful story must be made into a children's book as soon as possible. I believe that this should be a must read for children, parents and especially grand parents. This is truly a magical read. Bravo!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
This truly beautiful, wonderful story must be made into a children's book as soon as possible. I believe that this should be a must read for children, parents and especially grand parents. This is truly a magical read. Bravo!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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Oh bless you, nomi, for your lovely review and your special '6' stars! :) Sharyn
Comment from AprilShower
My goodness what a lovely story! You've got me believing in fairies now. This story certainly brought back memories. This little girl was blessed with a grandfather who loved her. I truly enjoyed this story, visionary1234. Thank you for sharing it.
April
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
My goodness what a lovely story! You've got me believing in fairies now. This story certainly brought back memories. This little girl was blessed with a grandfather who loved her. I truly enjoyed this story, visionary1234. Thank you for sharing it.
April
Comment Written 30-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2012
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And bless you big-time, April! I'm so glad you "vibed" with my story AND gave me one of your magic '6's! So much appreciated! :) Sharyn
Comment from writing2inspire
I really like your story, and not just I'm a grandfather too. Your dialogue was engaging and realistic, and the picture you drew of the grandfather and his granddaughter were perfect. Some of your descriptions were a bit long. For example in a dialogue about 1/6th of the way into the story you wrote: "She interrupted him, jiggling up and down with excitement and still bubbling with laughter." which could easily been shortened to: She jiggled up and down with laughter. Some of your descriptions are excellent. For example you wrote:"at the beginning of her ooh-I-can't-wait life ahead, her laughter like silver bells to the old man's ears. --" Ahh, the poem crafter in you was coming out. Some of your images fell flat. For example you wrote: "He stored it in his memory, like one of those new-fangled cameras he'd seen." A photo graphic memory doesn't seem to fit for an old man here, especially when comparing it to digital stored images. Over all, however, this was an excellent story.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
I really like your story, and not just I'm a grandfather too. Your dialogue was engaging and realistic, and the picture you drew of the grandfather and his granddaughter were perfect. Some of your descriptions were a bit long. For example in a dialogue about 1/6th of the way into the story you wrote: "She interrupted him, jiggling up and down with excitement and still bubbling with laughter." which could easily been shortened to: She jiggled up and down with laughter. Some of your descriptions are excellent. For example you wrote:"at the beginning of her ooh-I-can't-wait life ahead, her laughter like silver bells to the old man's ears. --" Ahh, the poem crafter in you was coming out. Some of your images fell flat. For example you wrote: "He stored it in his memory, like one of those new-fangled cameras he'd seen." A photo graphic memory doesn't seem to fit for an old man here, especially when comparing it to digital stored images. Over all, however, this was an excellent story.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
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thx so much my dear - I agree - it still needs some trimming! :) Sharyn
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a delightful story, Sharyn, tugging at
my heart strings - relationships with grandparents
and grandchildren are really so special .
I miss our two
eldest grand-daughters - 18 & 22 - both in Florida - the
eldest just finished her 4 yrs at FIU Athletics for golf, the youngest, just started the 4 yrs - but they'll be home for Christmas.
The other three are younger and we see them all regularly.
Thanks for sharing this - lovely.
Margaret
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
What a delightful story, Sharyn, tugging at
my heart strings - relationships with grandparents
and grandchildren are really so special .
I miss our two
eldest grand-daughters - 18 & 22 - both in Florida - the
eldest just finished her 4 yrs at FIU Athletics for golf, the youngest, just started the 4 yrs - but they'll be home for Christmas.
The other three are younger and we see them all regularly.
Thanks for sharing this - lovely.
Margaret
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
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so glad you found this one Margaret - thank you so much for your lovely reading & review! I'm afraid my two grand-kids are in England, so I only get to see them once every year or so!
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from Curtis Hatch
This is such a lovely story and so well told and written. The relationship between little Janie and Granddad is truly delightful for those of us who have grandchildren. God has blessed me...I still have my 'Nell', and we live together in our own home. Our grandchildren have grown well past the age of fairy tales. The youngest is fifteen. The story is written so well it tugs at my heartstrings. It is a delightful read.
Godspeed,
Curtis
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
This is such a lovely story and so well told and written. The relationship between little Janie and Granddad is truly delightful for those of us who have grandchildren. God has blessed me...I still have my 'Nell', and we live together in our own home. Our grandchildren have grown well past the age of fairy tales. The youngest is fifteen. The story is written so well it tugs at my heartstrings. It is a delightful read.
Godspeed,
Curtis
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
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I'm so glad you got to this one, Curtis! A special thank you for your much appreciated magic '6', too ... and I'm so glad you have your "Nell"! :) Sharyn
Comment from HeatherAllen
I love this story! From the exuberance of Janie to the loving granddad, I saw everything unfolding as though I were watching it. Wonderful read!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
I love this story! From the exuberance of Janie to the loving granddad, I saw everything unfolding as though I were watching it. Wonderful read!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2012
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oh I'm so glad you got to reading this one Heather! Thank you so much for your lovely '6'!!! yeah!!!
Best wishes
Sharyn