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Savannah Love

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Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?

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Comment from Eric Corsten
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This kind of detail makes the diff

"I need to grab my sweater and finish fastening this shoe." Paige pointed to the coral stiletto sandal.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2012


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Comment from abbasjoy
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Well, it seems that Paige is about to meet Cash's parents. Things seem to be progressing in just the right direction.
I kind of like these two. The romance is in the air, but they are taking it slow which is always good.
I look forward to future chapters, and to hear more about the ghosts.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2012


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Comment from Shirley McLain
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nice chapter. Easy reading and I look forward to the next one. This morning at the church with Cash can open up potential for problems. Great job.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2012


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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
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This a good chapter. The bi-play between the two characters is great. I liked the picture as well. I saw no need for editing.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012


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Comment from fictionwriter
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Great stuff. I love how they joke and rib each other throughout the chapter. Seems that they might really get a stronger bond going. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012


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Comment from mumsyone
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Another good chapter, Barbara. I almost missed this one, with Thanksgiving holidays and all.

He liked the old(-)fashioned churches."

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012


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    Thank you for the kind review and the catch.
Comment from rheabug
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This is a very good write. I enjoyed it and want more. Congratulations on the pick of the photo that accompanies this presentation.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012


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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jjstar
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Hey there,

This was just a fabulous read. Paige's character is so fun and sassy! Loving her. Cash's southern heritage is certainly showing to. Great saying about ol' Scratch and the war. This was just such a fun read. Loved it!

'I had to. You wouldn't stop ringing the bell."==hahaha..need "before I rather than '?

Mom'd shoot me full of rock-salt, then she'd give me a tongue-lashing that'd make Ol' Scratch blush.==hahah...nice!

Northerners should've learned that during the war===hahaha excellent!


 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Barbara,

It appears that Paige and Cash are going forward with their relationship. At first I thought they were going to Church to get married and then I realized that wasn't the case. You did a stellar job with the humorous conversations between them. Well done and virtual six....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
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Hi Barbara,

A bright pink sun dress for a deep south church? Erm ....

Nice chapter, but I've obviously missed some so now I'll have to go back and do some reading.

Patrick

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2012
    Thank you for the kind review.