Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Miss Merri, what a sweet love poem. I love that it's
humorous. Love should be fun as well as serious.
It's great to have silly moments to remember.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012

I totally agree Jude. Thanks so much for your kind review. MM

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi MissMerri,

A lovely work to read and fun for the reader. Had a giggle with this one. Great job my friend, and loved the artwork too.

Excellent and thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012

Thank you for this review. It made me smile to think you had a giggle with this. I'm glad you did.

Comment from mauial

Excellent

Keep them sparks going and it will be alright into the twilight years. Been married thirty two years and the spark is still there :)

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012

I'm so glad to hear that, Al. Keep it up! There is no reason a fire should ever go out as long as it is being fed. Thanks for your fun review.

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

I love the way you love getting and sending flying sparks! You like to get zapped on the lips with static. LOL

What a wonderful, spark-filled poem. You are a pair of quarks!

Cheers,
DW

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012

Thanks so much Donald. I'm delighted to know you got a kick out of this. I enjoyed writing it because it is more true than not. I'm married to a funny man. I never know what he might do next. Thank you for reviewing this for me.

Comment from Connie C

Exceptional

I love the playfulness of this, Adonna, with all the nods, pokes, and sparks. You sound like a woman who appreciates the fun that she has with the one she loves. I can see that in your eyes in your very cute picture and in person too!
Connie

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2012

Connie, I know you are probably exhausted from wedding preparations and all that you've been doing. Thank you so much for taking time to review my stuff. I sincerely appreciate that, and this wonderful review is especially gratifying. I did not really expect such a generous response to my fun-poking. This is sooooooo nice and I thank you for taking the time to do this. It means so much. MM

Comment from Alaskastory

Excellent

'Electric Love' is an amusing poem told with great exaggeration. I had to take second looks at some surprising words, especially 'fiend-buss' that portrays such a cruel or evil person. You may want to reconsider that one before lightning strikes. Most glad to see your smiling picture, MissM.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012

Hi MissA. I'm glad you liked my amusing poem. Well... at least I'd hoped it would amuse someone. I read your review days ago, and changed the words a little since I didn't to portray anyone in this story as "cruel or evil." Your "lightning strikes" comment really made me laugh. Good point!! Thanks for helping me out. I loved your review.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

That's so cute. You are very lucky. Be sure to treasure every little minute no matter how small.Shocking picture! LOL Nice lay-out. Cute poem. A strong five. Nancy

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012

Yes... I do treasure every moment, and know well how blessed I am. Thanks for the strong five. :p

Comment from terry drake

Excellent

Your eyes sparkle and your smile gleams with delight. I can see that in your picture as your poetry reveals the truth. You have shared a glorious moment in your life with your poetry.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012

Thanks so much Terry! What a lovely and uplifting review and I want you to know how much I appreciate every word. :p You are very, very nice!

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

This is a sweet love poem. Obviously
A love that's full of fun as well as "sparks."
Strong rhyme and meter and entertaining images
Add to the pleasure of reading your poem.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012

Thank you for your kind review. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. MM

Comment from writer c

Excellent

This is such a light and endearing write, Adonna! As in all of your poetry, the rhythm and meter add to the enjoyment. This reflects a playful lovingness well known to those in long term relationships who still share "crazy hot sparks".
Carol

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2012

Thank you so much Carol. I loved your review. You know exactly what I'm talking about, obviously. :p