In My Dream
A dream I had involving The Doors lead singer80 total reviews
Comment from Jane Johnson
Interesting imagination. Good read. Easy to follow. Words flowed well. Good imagery. Nice artwork. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Interesting imagination. Good read. Easy to follow. Words flowed well. Good imagery. Nice artwork. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Jane.
Comment from volcomfury
Huge Jim Morrison fan here. Loved the poem. It is Creative take on a unique subject. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Huge Jim Morrison fan here. Loved the poem. It is Creative take on a unique subject. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Fury.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Justin
This is a cyber 6 star review. This was excellent. It was such a waste of a life and talent when he died. I have always been a huge fan. What a poem. It sounds more like a nightmare to me. I hate snakes but that is no reflection on your poetic talent
Bear
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Hey there Justin
This is a cyber 6 star review. This was excellent. It was such a waste of a life and talent when he died. I have always been a huge fan. What a poem. It sounds more like a nightmare to me. I hate snakes but that is no reflection on your poetic talent
Bear
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Glen.
Comment from ChangeForA20
I am glad you took the time to explain the whole Morrison having a nick name because I was unaware. I like the imagery you pose in this poem, but my issue with it is I guess I don't really understand the value, or moral you are trying to present. But, it is very well written and it takes courage to post any type of poetry anywhere, so with that in mind: Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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I am glad you took the time to explain the whole Morrison having a nick name because I was unaware. I like the imagery you pose in this poem, but my issue with it is I guess I don't really understand the value, or moral you are trying to present. But, it is very well written and it takes courage to post any type of poetry anywhere, so with that in mind: Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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I guess the moral would be not to be too trusting with anybody who you've never meant especially rockstars. Thanks for the review change.
Comment from teresa.b
This is an awesome poem. So different from most of the work here. The picture of Jim Morrison hooked me and I love the intensity throughout the story within your poem. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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This is an awesome poem. So different from most of the work here. The picture of Jim Morrison hooked me and I love the intensity throughout the story within your poem. Nice.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Teresa.
Comment from Shirley B
Great poem. It did read like a song. When I was reading your notes, I started hearing, "Come on baby light my fire." in my head. Great imagery, great use of your imagination and great rhyme. I really enjoyed it. Just to show you how bizarre my mind is. I even thought of The Jacksonville (Fl.) Lizard Kings. They are a minor league hockey team. Sorry about that. ! :) Shirley
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Great poem. It did read like a song. When I was reading your notes, I started hearing, "Come on baby light my fire." in my head. Great imagery, great use of your imagination and great rhyme. I really enjoyed it. Just to show you how bizarre my mind is. I even thought of The Jacksonville (Fl.) Lizard Kings. They are a minor league hockey team. Sorry about that. ! :) Shirley
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Shirley.
Comment from Ralph Miller
Yes, I can relate to that, well I certainly relate to The Lizard King and The Doors. Have an old LP near me now. Great achievments during a tragicaly short life.
Good poem; real dream?
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Yes, I can relate to that, well I certainly relate to The Lizard King and The Doors. Have an old LP near me now. Great achievments during a tragicaly short life.
Good poem; real dream?
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Ralph. Made up dream.
Comment from lynnhartz
This is a very insightful poem and I like the information you left about it. I know who some of the older singers were, but I sort of missed them between situations in my own life. Keep writing and start singing, if you don't already. You have much to do with your life!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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This is a very insightful poem and I like the information you left about it. I know who some of the older singers were, but I sort of missed them between situations in my own life. Keep writing and start singing, if you don't already. You have much to do with your life!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you hartz.
Comment from Janet Foor
Thank was quite a dream. Great imagery in your fantasy. I enjoyed the read. Your creative words and tone to the poem made for an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Thank was quite a dream. Great imagery in your fantasy. I enjoyed the read. Your creative words and tone to the poem made for an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much Jmf.
Comment from Cobalt Blue
An interesting fantasy! No doubt Jim would take note of it. He was always one of my favorites putting out poetry like no one else could. I liked this. Have a 6!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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An interesting fantasy! No doubt Jim would take note of it. He was always one of my favorites putting out poetry like no one else could. I liked this. Have a 6!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much for the lovely review Cobalt!.
