Fire Inside
A short poem162 total reviews
Comment from Harlequin
True feeling and an honest approach to it made it a great, thought-provoking short poem. :-) Well done and thanks for sharing. :-) Ed
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True feeling and an honest approach to it made it a great, thought-provoking short poem. :-) Well done and thanks for sharing. :-) Ed
Comment Written 10-Jul-2012
Comment from Inky Cat
I found this to be powerful. Short and direct, like a fire. I really like how the spark was lost and relit- and now the person is a full fire. You conveyed a lot in a short number of words! What a poem should do, really!
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I found this to be powerful. Short and direct, like a fire. I really like how the spark was lost and relit- and now the person is a full fire. You conveyed a lot in a short number of words! What a poem should do, really!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2012
Comment from mk
well. could have fooled me...the image is fantastic and the little rhyme is outrageously well penned. these are hard to write and you did a splendid job
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well. could have fooled me...the image is fantastic and the little rhyme is outrageously well penned. these are hard to write and you did a splendid job
Comment Written 09-Jul-2012
Comment from Otto Loewi
This is your first? It's fantastic! Nice work.
It's good it didn't come easily. In my opinion, poetry should always be difficult to write. I don't have anything constructive to write here.
Again, great job
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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This is your first? It's fantastic! Nice work.
It's good it didn't come easily. In my opinion, poetry should always be difficult to write. I don't have anything constructive to write here.
Again, great job
Comment Written 08-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2012
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Thanks. I appreciate your kind words. It was difficult for me. I tend to write poems, with stanzas that are 4 times as long...lol
Comment from venika
This is an excellent write. i like your rhyming words. A great 5-5-5. Nice art work too. Good luck for the contest.
thanks for sharing.
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This is an excellent write. i like your rhyming words. A great 5-5-5. Nice art work too. Good luck for the contest.
thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2012
Comment from jb wade
Sounds good to me. The artwork is beautiful. Sounds like the beginning of a country western song. Thanks for sharing your work.
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Sounds good to me. The artwork is beautiful. Sounds like the beginning of a country western song. Thanks for sharing your work.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2012
Comment from closetpoetjester
Hey there...super poem and plenty of fire in the belly and perhaps the loins as well *smirk*...I do the minimal format thing sometimes and more often than not I find myself toiling over 17 damn syllables for hours yet I can write a 6 stanza rhymer in a quarter of the time. I certainly appreciate what you have written and for a newbie at this you've nailed the feeling...with such a short format you've done well to rhyme although not necessary...great job.
Got a spark this end! LOL Good luck in the voting.
Cheers closet
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2012
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Hey there...super poem and plenty of fire in the belly and perhaps the loins as well *smirk*...I do the minimal format thing sometimes and more often than not I find myself toiling over 17 damn syllables for hours yet I can write a 6 stanza rhymer in a quarter of the time. I certainly appreciate what you have written and for a newbie at this you've nailed the feeling...with such a short format you've done well to rhyme although not necessary...great job.
Got a spark this end! LOL Good luck in the voting.
Cheers closet
Comment Written 07-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2012
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Thank You very much for the great review. I too, have trouble with short poems. I appreciate you taking the time to read my little write.
Comment from mfcohiba
It read well, rhymed well... very nice use of fire elements here. I like this way of love description. Lots of strength.
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It read well, rhymed well... very nice use of fire elements here. I like this way of love description. Lots of strength.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2012
Comment from terry drake
Well we all have met someone who has been a burning ember in our heart. Finding the water to cool the torment is worth the experience. Thanks for your poem.
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Well we all have met someone who has been a burning ember in our heart. Finding the water to cool the torment is worth the experience. Thanks for your poem.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2012
Comment from FREE-ONE
This was smoking hot...I loved the spark, embers, fire connection that was visual and I could feel the heat...you have the passion under these words and in a few you have given them life...I thank you for sharing your first attempt of magnificent proportion....I enjoyed...FREE-ONE
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2012
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This was smoking hot...I loved the spark, embers, fire connection that was visual and I could feel the heat...you have the passion under these words and in a few you have given them life...I thank you for sharing your first attempt of magnificent proportion....I enjoyed...FREE-ONE
Comment Written 01-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2012
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Thank you very much for the great review!!!! I am very glad that you enjoyed my poem!!!
