Windows To The Past
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Once Upon A Time in Oregon"Poems about the old West.
33 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, I've read the tombstones I'm country towns of children dying of all sorts of things, in the midst of horror, there was still manifold joy, could we handle it? This is a beautifully written post dear Nancy, you've done an outstanding, job, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Oh yes indeed, I've read the tombstones I'm country towns of children dying of all sorts of things, in the midst of horror, there was still manifold joy, could we handle it? This is a beautifully written post dear Nancy, you've done an outstanding, job, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Those old Grave Yards. How many wives and dead children some men had. Most women died in childbirth or gave birth to still born babies for various reasons. Then there were a few women who laid to rest several husbands. We used to go visit old grave yards in Illinois AND Nevada. Very interesting. Thanks for the review Roy. Nancy:)
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Comment from judiverse
That was such a story of courage end endurance despite the heartbreak of losing the four children. These pioneers paved the way for building the west. They were willing to take risks and venture into this unknown territory, with God's guidance. You do a beautiful job of telling the story of the George family in your poem. Excellent rhyme and flow. judi
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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That was such a story of courage end endurance despite the heartbreak of losing the four children. These pioneers paved the way for building the west. They were willing to take risks and venture into this unknown territory, with God's guidance. You do a beautiful job of telling the story of the George family in your poem. Excellent rhyme and flow. judi
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the thoughtful review and stars, Judi. I love American History. It is very interesting. So many stories. Nancy:)
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You're welcome. There's always much more to learn. I'm interested in American history too, judi
Comment from country ranch writer
Settling out in the west like Oregon takes a lot of getting used to. It is way different from city life. Everyone traveling together hoping for a new beginning. Sacraficing life and limb along the way. Ir wasn't easy fighting floods losing so much ending up with little left to get by on.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Settling out in the west like Oregon takes a lot of getting used to. It is way different from city life. Everyone traveling together hoping for a new beginning. Sacraficing life and limb along the way. Ir wasn't easy fighting floods losing so much ending up with little left to get by on.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the terrific feedback Barb. They were tough to even try but when they made it there the real test began. You are so right.
Have a lovely day dear. Nancy:)
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Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written, historic poem. Your poem gives us insight of the struggles the pioneers endured venturing out in the West. Your poem reads well. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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This is a well written, historic poem. Your poem gives us insight of the struggles the pioneers endured venturing out in the West. Your poem reads well. Very nice job.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the lovely thoughtful review and stars, my friend. Have a wonderful day! Nancy:)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I hate when I miss really good posts the first time around, but I'm happy I caught this time. Thank you for re-posting it. You did a lot of research and it shows.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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I hate when I miss really good posts the first time around, but I'm happy I caught this time. Thank you for re-posting it. You did a lot of research and it shows.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Thanks for the review and stars, Barbara. It happens to all of us. LOL Have a nice day, Dear. Nancy:)
Comment from damommy
Beautifully written and full of history. We can't know the hardships and terrors these people faced. They were certainly heroes who found a way west despite all that happened to them. Very interesting author notes.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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Beautifully written and full of history. We can't know the hardships and terrors these people faced. They were certainly heroes who found a way west despite all that happened to them. Very interesting author notes.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
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He should have known that river would flash flood. To build a home on an Island in the middle of a river was not very wise. Thanks for the review and stars, Yvonne. Have a great day. Nancy:)
Comment from heyjude
Nancy, wow. What a story poem. You could have entered
this in the share a story in a poem contest. That is
so amazing and so heart rending for this family.
Pioneers had so much suffering. I'm so thankful for
those who went before us and paved a better way for us.
reply by the author on 27-May-2012
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Nancy, wow. What a story poem. You could have entered
this in the share a story in a poem contest. That is
so amazing and so heart rending for this family.
Pioneers had so much suffering. I'm so thankful for
those who went before us and paved a better way for us.
Comment Written 27-May-2012
reply by the author on 27-May-2012
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I didn't know about the contest. I always seem to miss them. Never have any luck anyhow.I take that back , I won a door prize one time when I was trying to be invisable at a gathering. That's MY luck. Nancy
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Don't feel bad Nancy. I don't win contests either. Judy
Comment from Judy Swanson
Nancy, what a tale you tell here! You've taken a piece of history and woven it into a fine poem - or possibly even into a folk song. It tells a sad story, but reads lyrically and could be set to music. You've caught the strength and courage it must have taken to move west, facing all of the expected difficulties, and then suffering the worst of every parent's nightmares - the thing that it seems one could never overcome. And, yet, the story of life goes on and healing begins. Very well done.
Judy
reply by the author on 27-May-2012
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Nancy, what a tale you tell here! You've taken a piece of history and woven it into a fine poem - or possibly even into a folk song. It tells a sad story, but reads lyrically and could be set to music. You've caught the strength and courage it must have taken to move west, facing all of the expected difficulties, and then suffering the worst of every parent's nightmares - the thing that it seems one could never overcome. And, yet, the story of life goes on and healing begins. Very well done.
Judy
Comment Written 27-May-2012
reply by the author on 27-May-2012
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Thanks for the encouraging review Judy! Nancy
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You are welcome. I hope to read more of your stories. Judy
Comment from Meta~Mark
I like this line hereWe must tip our hat to them those stalwart pioneers. they ventured west..through the rugged terrain searching for hope..excellent!
reply by the author on 27-May-2012
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I like this line hereWe must tip our hat to them those stalwart pioneers. they ventured west..through the rugged terrain searching for hope..excellent!
Comment Written 27-May-2012
reply by the author on 27-May-2012
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Thank you very much for reviewing my poem. Honeycomb
Comment from Bobbi22
It is amazing how much the early settlers endured and the pain of so much loss suffered. This is an interesting but sad story. So many stories that we can uncover when looking for our family history. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-May-2012
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It is amazing how much the early settlers endured and the pain of so much loss suffered. This is an interesting but sad story. So many stories that we can uncover when looking for our family history. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2012
reply by the author on 27-May-2012
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. Honeycomb
