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Comment from Chris Tee
This is an absolutely sweet serene and marvelous poem you have composed here for us old sport.
Well done indeed with this splendid work here ma'am.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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This is an absolutely sweet serene and marvelous poem you have composed here for us old sport.
Well done indeed with this splendid work here ma'am.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Thanks so much,Sir Tee.
Comment from laren
A beautiful prayer for the art, It has to be expressed with passion and truth. Discover the living author behind the poem.
I loved reading this poem so well written!
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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A beautiful prayer for the art, It has to be expressed with passion and truth. Discover the living author behind the poem.
I loved reading this poem so well written!
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Thank you, laren!
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from ameen786
Bravo! Jewell my friend, I know I said this before and I'll say is again, you are one accomplished poet, you my friend captured the essence of that deeper part that you talked about in your author notes, I admire your superb poetic reflections, very creative and wonderful imagination. The unique craftsmanship comes from unique imagination as well as the desire to evoke the sleeping minds/hearts of the readers, your awesome write is testament of your own challenge. Your outstanding verse just inspired me to write a tanka, I shall post that before I sleep. Thanks for the joy of reading your mesmerizing poetry.
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Bravo! Jewell my friend, I know I said this before and I'll say is again, you are one accomplished poet, you my friend captured the essence of that deeper part that you talked about in your author notes, I admire your superb poetic reflections, very creative and wonderful imagination. The unique craftsmanship comes from unique imagination as well as the desire to evoke the sleeping minds/hearts of the readers, your awesome write is testament of your own challenge. Your outstanding verse just inspired me to write a tanka, I shall post that before I sleep. Thanks for the joy of reading your mesmerizing poetry.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Ameen, your beautiful strand of six stars is such a .blessing !
Comment from Diny
Worthy of a seven! DEAREST FRIEND and muse, you continually challenge the poetic spirit to be reborn, blessings to you for this one. It felt very personal and full of promise. Encouraging and sweet. Hugs, Di
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Worthy of a seven! DEAREST FRIEND and muse, you continually challenge the poetic spirit to be reborn, blessings to you for this one. It felt very personal and full of promise. Encouraging and sweet. Hugs, Di
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Hello Diny. So happy this touched you,
Promise indeed!
Comment from Bobbi22
This is a very creative poem filled with eloquent imagery and metaphors. The poem drawers the reader in and holds interest throughout -- and the artwork does much of the same. Excellent poem. I will look at this as a challenge.
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This is a very creative poem filled with eloquent imagery and metaphors. The poem drawers the reader in and holds interest throughout -- and the artwork does much of the same. Excellent poem. I will look at this as a challenge.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Hello, RightPics! Thanks for such a kind review. Can't wait to see the results!
Comment from reconciled
This is poetry at its best! I freak'in love this poem.It flows so effortlessly you feel as if your thinking it, not reading it.Wow, I don't know what else to say-its perfect.God bless-Michael.
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This is poetry at its best! I freak'in love this poem.It flows so effortlessly you feel as if your thinking it, not reading it.Wow, I don't know what else to say-its perfect.God bless-Michael.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
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Thanks Michael! Wow what an enthusiastic review! Love your screen name. Makes me want to know more about you.
Comment from steevie
a very deep seated spiritual poem that certainly captures the essence of a close relationship of a heavenly being.
Your words are well chosen and used with skill and precision ... an awesome poem, Jewel
steve
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a very deep seated spiritual poem that certainly captures the essence of a close relationship of a heavenly being.
Your words are well chosen and used with skill and precision ... an awesome poem, Jewel
steve
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Hi Steevie! I truly appreciate this kind review.
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you're very welcome
steve
Comment from jlsavell
I'll paint for you, of silver swans
flaunting jeweled breast
The prima donas
of placid emerald lagoons,
gracefully, with aplomb glissade
upon the elixir of life
A dance more exquisite
than Tchaikovsky could dream
A ballet beguiling nature's audience
The iridescence schools of dragon scales
just beneath their stage, scattering in profusion
Rippling fluid waves
The cast of August moon, floats in onyx sky
illuminating the show, spotlight,
golden gilded ribbons imbue silver swans,
sidling between their petit jete'
A spectacular affair
monarchs stand stately in the shadows
brusque silhouettes of oaks, reflect,
whispering breezes peal their august leaves,
orchestrating, eliding, joining the tendu
In dazzling hues I'll compose life for you
infusing layers of pastel for gentle touch
a broad stroke of vivid chroma
leaps with joy
Splashes of ochre dares to laugh
Feathered lines of green brings to life
birthing hope
Intersperse tones of blue, vivid, sure,
as the azure sky, atop which faith will fly
The purest white to highlight truth
Shades of crimson will bloom for love
Soft lines of lilac will catch the eye,
drawing grace with softest touch
Vibrant gold, yellows will tell of warmth
Sienna conjures the sense of ground
and in this art, you will find, God's gift of life
A masterpiece, no rival can be found
Jewel, shall I go on.. I do have to go home sometime tonight... lol... jimi
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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I'll paint for you, of silver swans
flaunting jeweled breast
The prima donas
of placid emerald lagoons,
gracefully, with aplomb glissade
upon the elixir of life
A dance more exquisite
than Tchaikovsky could dream
A ballet beguiling nature's audience
The iridescence schools of dragon scales
just beneath their stage, scattering in profusion
Rippling fluid waves
The cast of August moon, floats in onyx sky
illuminating the show, spotlight,
golden gilded ribbons imbue silver swans,
sidling between their petit jete'
A spectacular affair
monarchs stand stately in the shadows
brusque silhouettes of oaks, reflect,
whispering breezes peal their august leaves,
orchestrating, eliding, joining the tendu
In dazzling hues I'll compose life for you
infusing layers of pastel for gentle touch
a broad stroke of vivid chroma
leaps with joy
Splashes of ochre dares to laugh
Feathered lines of green brings to life
birthing hope
Intersperse tones of blue, vivid, sure,
as the azure sky, atop which faith will fly
The purest white to highlight truth
Shades of crimson will bloom for love
Soft lines of lilac will catch the eye,
drawing grace with softest touch
Vibrant gold, yellows will tell of warmth
Sienna conjures the sense of ground
and in this art, you will find, God's gift of life
A masterpiece, no rival can be found
Jewel, shall I go on.. I do have to go home sometime tonight... lol... jimi
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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Jimi, that's the most gorgeous review I'vd ever gotten! LOVE IT! POST IT!
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Girl, that was the watered down version... But I must apologize, yuo deserve a real review of your work.. it was just your challenge and what your ethereal words seduced me into writing.. stunning work of yours.. absolutely.. you are a most gifted writer, one of the best on this site... jimi
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No. This was a perfect review, especiallt considering my topic! I would rather have a great emitional response than a grade any day.
Too mant "poets" need to lighten up.
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I am going to post it, but the full version and probably not today.. the beginning will surprise you girl and thank you for the inspiration!!! you visionary you!
Comment from rchitwood
Very lovely and I enjoyed the way you describe the poet.
Your words flow so well with such pure emotion you write very well. Keep it up and your photo goes very well with your lovely poem. Love and Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Very lovely and I enjoyed the way you describe the poet.
Your words flow so well with such pure emotion you write very well. Keep it up and your photo goes very well with your lovely poem. Love and Blessings Rita
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Rita, you are so kind to me. Thanks so much!
Comment from Martie
Hello Jewell
It would seem that you do by example, those things that you would like all poets to do. I guess inspiration comes and goes in many different ways. Yours inspired me...now I must look for my muse and give her a swift kick in the get-along. :)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Hello Jewell
It would seem that you do by example, those things that you would like all poets to do. I guess inspiration comes and goes in many different ways. Yours inspired me...now I must look for my muse and give her a swift kick in the get-along. :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Just love you, Martie! Thanks so much.
