Chosen Colors
Journal into poetry17 total reviews
Comment from M. Karol
Some really good flow and rhyming here. Yes, why can't have our own colors to express when we know what we feel. Liked the description of each color and associated feelings and reasoning thereof.
Madhvi
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Some really good flow and rhyming here. Yes, why can't have our own colors to express when we know what we feel. Liked the description of each color and associated feelings and reasoning thereof.
Madhvi
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Wow! Thank you so much for your insight and so generous review! Im so glad that you liked my poem and that you found it worthy of six stars... You made my day!
Comment from adewpearl
good use of alternate-line rhyming and good proximate rhyming with pairs like inside/sky and gray/rage and know/soul
good alliteration in sunset sky
Intriguing observations :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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good use of alternate-line rhyming and good proximate rhyming with pairs like inside/sky and gray/rage and know/soul
good alliteration in sunset sky
Intriguing observations :-) Brooke
Comment Written 27-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your detailed review and your kind words!!
Comment from KiaraLG
Very well written. I had to read it twice to fully understand it, but it's well worth reading a second time. And you're closing verse... speechless. Perfect!
Kiara :)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2012
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Very well written. I had to read it twice to fully understand it, but it's well worth reading a second time. And you're closing verse... speechless. Perfect!
Kiara :)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read twice and for your kindness. blessings, jude
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You're very welcome. Keep on writing!
:)
Comment from reconciled
Freak'in beautiful poem.Perfect rhyme and it flows like the wave's in the picture.I love the way you connect colors to emotions.Great read.God bless-Michael.
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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Freak'in beautiful poem.Perfect rhyme and it flows like the wave's in the picture.I love the way you connect colors to emotions.Great read.God bless-Michael.
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
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thank you so much for the wonderful encouragement. so glad you liked my poem. God bless, jude
Comment from Purple Lily
This is a wonderful poem. More than the words themselves,what I love is the idea behind it --"the colors of our soul". I can also distinguish a touch of humor, especially in the first verse, which is my favorite verse.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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This is a wonderful poem. More than the words themselves,what I love is the idea behind it --"the colors of our soul". I can also distinguish a touch of humor, especially in the first verse, which is my favorite verse.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2012
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Thank you again!
Comment from robyn corum
Why, you ask, this silly game?
I do not fully know
but rightfully we all can name
the colors of our soul
very powerful! I enjoyed this post very much!
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Why, you ask, this silly game?
I do not fully know
but rightfully we all can name
the colors of our soul
very powerful! I enjoyed this post very much!
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Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your kindness and generous review!
Comment from j0ka
the colors choices describing each word and the tone of the poem flow nicely. I love the way you described the colors of the emotion and feelings in your soul. Loved it from beginning to end. blessings.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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the colors choices describing each word and the tone of the poem flow nicely. I love the way you described the colors of the emotion and feelings in your soul. Loved it from beginning to end. blessings.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2012
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Wow, this means a lot to me and i am so glad that you liked my poem! jude
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keep up the good writing, it's all I ask lol =) take care
