Comment from justjo66

Excellent

Beautiful artwork and verses.
I liked your rhyming and the
flow to your poem.
I liked this very much. This is a very
true and sweet poem.
Thanks

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011

Dear justjo66, thank you for your review. dove

Comment from joshua.vega

Needs Improvement

This poem is nice, but it lacks a definite voice. It has a nice message. (Not trying to be mean) But this whole poem needs to be reworked. Especially the last stanza.

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011

Dear Joshua vega, thank you for your review. Dove

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Very well written. The rhyming stanzas have a great rhythm to them. The artwork is very well chosen and the stron words you have chosen enhance the meaning of the poem.

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2011

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2011

Dear RYME4U, thank you for your review. Dove