Anger/hate
Senryu about feeling ; 5-7-529 total reviews
Comment from writerwish
Yes anger overtakes us all, but hatred becomes more permanent and devastating for the hater. Well written and can relate to everyone. Well said, my friend.
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Yes anger overtakes us all, but hatred becomes more permanent and devastating for the hater. Well written and can relate to everyone. Well said, my friend.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from gazzagodbod
Again such wise words its awful to hate anything or anyone great picture compliments well great message thanks my friend gazzax
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Again such wise words its awful to hate anything or anyone great picture compliments well great message thanks my friend gazzax
Comment Written 07-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from ulster3
Hello, dear robina (Ine).
You have written a wonderful commentary type of 5-7-5.
There is a big difference between anger and hate as your poem points out. I wish you well in the contest.
Warmly, Rebecca
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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Hello, dear robina (Ine).
You have written a wonderful commentary type of 5-7-5.
There is a big difference between anger and hate as your poem points out. I wish you well in the contest.
Warmly, Rebecca
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from rchitwood
Very good poem and we could all take this advice.Your poem has good emotional images and is very creative.I love it when you can describe so much in just a few lines or words.Blessings Rita
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Very good poem and we could all take this advice.Your poem has good emotional images and is very creative.I love it when you can describe so much in just a few lines or words.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Espresso momma
Amen, amen and amen! Hate is a terrible thing and can do so much harm that at times cannot be fixed. Oh do not hate. Yes that is a good haiku. Thanks.
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Amen, amen and amen! Hate is a terrible thing and can do so much harm that at times cannot be fixed. Oh do not hate. Yes that is a good haiku. Thanks.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from rheabug
A good representation of the haiku. The art work goes perfectly with this piece. Nice going with this offering. Blessings!
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A good representation of the haiku. The art work goes perfectly with this piece. Nice going with this offering. Blessings!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from InterestingRon
An intriguing 5/7/5 poem. Short and sweet, but with a big message.
Of course we humans are extremely complicated. It's quite possible for us to be angry with someone, and still love them. Making up is always a great pleasure. Hate though is simply evil. It can eat your heart out.
A good presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Ron
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An intriguing 5/7/5 poem. Short and sweet, but with a big message.
Of course we humans are extremely complicated. It's quite possible for us to be angry with someone, and still love them. Making up is always a great pleasure. Hate though is simply evil. It can eat your heart out.
A good presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Ron
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from WilliamDeen
GREAT senryu poem! Good syllable form of 5-7-5. Anger is felt almost always by us, humans. You can be angry with someone and not hate them...
Good moral in your poem!
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GREAT senryu poem! Good syllable form of 5-7-5. Anger is felt almost always by us, humans. You can be angry with someone and not hate them...
Good moral in your poem!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
You are very good at these wee poems. Hate is a very strong emotion. Your message is wise in its meaning. Anger will pass.
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You are very good at these wee poems. Hate is a very strong emotion. Your message is wise in its meaning. Anger will pass.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thanks Avril
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork
It truly sets the mood for your poem
Even though you use few words you struck a hard blow with your message. Thank you for sharing
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I like the artwork
It truly sets the mood for your poem
Even though you use few words you struck a hard blow with your message. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 06-Aug-2011
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Thanks Misscookie
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