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Rhyming Mirror Nonet

16 total reviews 
Comment from robina1978
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I found your poem really great.
Flows well and rhymes well(not forced)
No comments on structure.
Easy to read and about something most of us need sometimes.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind review!!! Debbie
reply by robina1978 on 25-Jul-2011
    most welcome
Comment from adewpearl
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Your syllable count and structure is perfect for the mirror nonet. I like how some lines that mirror are identical and others are just parallel, so that nothing sounds forced, and I really like the thoughtful description you provide of your wished-for special place. Brooke

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
    Thanks so much Brooke!!! Debbie
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I was completely caught off guard with this one. It was beyond stunning. It pulled me into your words, and somehow I felt connected as if requesting my own hideaway.
I loved the Nonets ability to mirror back, and that may be why I am sitting here going "wow".
But I think too, the emotion buried within this pieces awakens the part of me that is fanciful, a dreamer....

Yes excellence and beauty you have captured with this one.
I loved it, and thoroughly enjoyed my time with it this morning.
Well done.
Maureen

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
    I am so glad you enjoyed it!!! Now that I am disabled, someone knows where I am at all times. I miss being spontaneous and being able to do my own thing~Debbie
reply by Maureen's Pen on 25-Jul-2011
    Maybe I understand this so well becuase I too am disabled and feel exactly as you described in your reply...all I can say is mee too!
    Maureen
Comment from peggles
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Your poem are so well written, your emotions, ideas, thoughts well expressed and put together in a beautiful tone and style

I enjoyed this poem and thought the photo fitted so very well

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
    Thank you so much for your kind review!!! Debbie
Comment from Denise S
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I just wished you had said " while centring on my goal instead. But good work, rreally good flow, the words chosen to describe the mood were just perfect.

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
    That is a suggestion I will look at. Thanks
Comment from Magics02
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The bloom picture is awesome and so is your write. I have my hideaway too. I guess we all need that space we call our own to go to and everyday for sure. I love everything about this write. Fantastic!!

Blessings

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2011


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2011
    Thank you so much for the kind words and review!!! Debbie
reply by Magics02 on 25-Jul-2011
    Always you are welcome