Sauvignon Blanc Grapes
Artistic Photo in 'Still Life' style200 total reviews
Comment from HeavenlyDreads
Thank you for the background information that you shared in your notes. Your poem was beautiful and very descriptive. I enjoyed it immensely. I learned a lot with so few words, and your notes of course.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you for the background information that you shared in your notes. Your poem was beautiful and very descriptive. I enjoyed it immensely. I learned a lot with so few words, and your notes of course.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you. So glad you appreciated the Notes.
Comment from ReaThomas
This is a really good job! These three line poems baffle me because I wonder how anyone can make poetry from three lines, but this was really good! Makes me want some grapes now, too!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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This is a really good job! These three line poems baffle me because I wonder how anyone can make poetry from three lines, but this was really good! Makes me want some grapes now, too!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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Thank you, Rea. That was a blessing!
Comment from happy to be here
I like this short Haiku-well they are all short I guess. I somehow wanted you to say 'plates' instead of plate, it seemed to flow better. It is quite cute that your poem suits your photo of the lovely figs on the white plate.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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I like this short Haiku-well they are all short I guess. I somehow wanted you to say 'plates' instead of plate, it seemed to flow better. It is quite cute that your poem suits your photo of the lovely figs on the white plate.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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Thank you, happy. Glad you noticed the lovely cut figs on the white plate. That photo was taken by me with a Canon Powershot camera.
Comment from Earthwriter
very nicely done piece of senyru I thought you followed the rules magnificently excellent presentation i wish you good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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very nicely done piece of senyru I thought you followed the rules magnificently excellent presentation i wish you good luck in the contest
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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Thank you, earthwriter. I like the words 'magnificently excellent presentation'. Be blessed.
Comment from sailor_to_the_bone
Great imagery! After reading this, I longed for the extravagant taste of great wine! This little poem was well put together. I really like this!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Great imagery! After reading this, I longed for the extravagant taste of great wine! This little poem was well put together. I really like this!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2011
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Oh, thank you, sailor to the bone. You said it straight from the heart.
Comment from Cynthia Tee
A very well composed haiku. I love the comparison between the lovely green grapes and the fine Wedgewood tableware resulting in the Sauvignon wine. We have some fine Sauvignon wines here in South Africa. Thank you for sharing and making me thirsty! Warm regards, Cynthia.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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A very well composed haiku. I love the comparison between the lovely green grapes and the fine Wedgewood tableware resulting in the Sauvignon wine. We have some fine Sauvignon wines here in South Africa. Thank you for sharing and making me thirsty! Warm regards, Cynthia.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. Cynthia, nobody has written better than Roy Campbell (South African poet) in his lines on Autumn. Read it.
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Thanks, I will do that.
Comment from Aussie
I totally enjoyed your poem. You have presented a simple subject and given it life and even taste. When a poet can awaken the senses in the reader, job well done. You had me wishing I had some grapes to savour. Brilliant work. Congratulations on All Time Best status, you deserve it.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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I totally enjoyed your poem. You have presented a simple subject and given it life and even taste. When a poet can awaken the senses in the reader, job well done. You had me wishing I had some grapes to savour. Brilliant work. Congratulations on All Time Best status, you deserve it.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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Thank you so much for the Six Stars. That was great! Bless you.
Comment from J. P. Egry
Nice haiku. I like the image of translucent grapes and the specificity of white Wedgewood is very good. Gices the feeling of elegance and fine wine.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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Nice haiku. I like the image of translucent grapes and the specificity of white Wedgewood is very good. Gices the feeling of elegance and fine wine.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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Sorry if this poem didn't rate 5 stars for you.
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I'm sorry too.
Comment from MizKat
TomPrato - Your 5-7-5 poem for the contest is wonderful. I enjoyed the read very much. Your author
notes telling about it were interesting too. Kat
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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TomPrato - Your 5-7-5 poem for the contest is wonderful. I enjoyed the read very much. Your author
notes telling about it were interesting too. Kat
Comment Written 11-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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Thank you, MizKat. Be blessed.
Comment from robyn corum
Yum! I have my camera, can I take a picture? Sounds beautiful. I like the poem. Stays within the poems structure, tastefully done. No cause for critique! Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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Yum! I have my camera, can I take a picture? Sounds beautiful. I like the poem. Stays within the poems structure, tastefully done. No cause for critique! Well done!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2011
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Thanks, Robo. It was meant to be a visual delight. :)
