The Ballad of Big Dan
A poem about a miner15 total reviews
Comment from dinoscribe
This is a marvelous piece. The rhythm and the beat flows so well. It is such a good poem that I don't know what else to say except good luck with the contest. :}
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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This is a marvelous piece. The rhythm and the beat flows so well. It is such a good poem that I don't know what else to say except good luck with the contest. :}
Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments. I'm so glad you like it.
Comment from amahra
Was this a true story? I loved it. It was written so well. I loved the rhyme words, they fit perfectly not forced to make them rhyme. I also loved the rhythm and I adored the Art of the sculpture. You did a wonderful job for the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Was this a true story? I loved it. It was written so well. I loved the rhyme words, they fit perfectly not forced to make them rhyme. I also loved the rhythm and I adored the Art of the sculpture. You did a wonderful job for the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Thanks for the review and comments. It is fiction. I'm so glad you like it.
Comment from moyramouse
What a terrific poem using these set words. They are all there but slipped in to look perfectly natural. I think you have done a really good job with this ballad style poem and I wish you well in the competition. x mouse
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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What a terrific poem using these set words. They are all there but slipped in to look perfectly natural. I think you have done a really good job with this ballad style poem and I wish you well in the competition. x mouse
Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments and good wishes.
Comment from kiwisteveh
You have done a good job with the prompt and I can see this as a song. Actually there is an existing song along the same lines, although I seem to remember it was Big John...
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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You have done a good job with the prompt and I can see this as a song. Actually there is an existing song along the same lines, although I seem to remember it was Big John...
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Thank you for the reveiw and the nice comments. Now that you mention it I do remember the song Big John.
Comment from Patrick Jordan
This is a wonderful story/tribute about a local hero. This is a fine write in every way. Your imagination is indeed wondrous! Thanks for the read.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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This is a wonderful story/tribute about a local hero. This is a fine write in every way. Your imagination is indeed wondrous! Thanks for the read.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and leave your nice comments..
