Harley, a Little Dog
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Harley's First Snow"Life and Times of a Jack Russell Terrier
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Comment from MelB
I like the pic of hi out in the snow. Our pets sure do add a lot to our lives. They keep us company and make us smile. I enjoyed reading about Harley.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
I like the pic of hi out in the snow. Our pets sure do add a lot to our lives. They keep us company and make us smile. I enjoyed reading about Harley.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I revived this post from 6 years ago to remind me of how much I love personifying animals. Harley has crossed over the rainbow bridge, but I'm now blessed to share my life with Howie and Bernie.
~patty~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
What a beautiful story about Harley he looks like a fun loving obedient dog that obviously you love your feelings come through so well in the way the story was written I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
What a beautiful story about Harley he looks like a fun loving obedient dog that obviously you love your feelings come through so well in the way the story was written I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your encouragement. I revived this post from 6 years ago. Harley has crossed the rainbow bridge, and as I prepare to start writing stories from my dogs, Howie and Bernie, I wanted to pay tribute to my little friend.
~patty~
Comment from patcelaw
Patty, it is fun to watch a new puppy come in contact for the first time with snow. The can cause us to smile as we watch them. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
Patty, it is fun to watch a new puppy come in contact for the first time with snow. The can cause us to smile as we watch them. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. I revived this post from almost six years ago to prepare myself in writing some more animal stories. I'm glad you liked the poem,
~patty~
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The writing is excellent. I like how you show a relationship between and and the dog - very well. I'm jumping in on this book so I didn't mark down for it but this was a little slow. There wasn't a gripping storyline to hold me. But that may be me opening the book at the wrong chapter. Excellent writing!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
The writing is excellent. I like how you show a relationship between and and the dog - very well. I'm jumping in on this book so I didn't mark down for it but this was a little slow. There wasn't a gripping storyline to hold me. But that may be me opening the book at the wrong chapter. Excellent writing!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
~patty~
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story of Harley's first experience of the snow out of his point of view. Our pets become as important to us, as we are important to them.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
A very well-written story of Harley's first experience of the snow out of his point of view. Our pets become as important to us, as we are important to them.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. Harley was a special little dog. I wanted to revive one of his stories before I start writing about the dogs I have now. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words.
~patty~
Comment from acvguard11
great job..i see why this piece is recognized and an all timme best award and it truly deserves this recognition and award...great job i realy enjoyed it and dont let others discourage you if you love to write
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2011
great job..i see why this piece is recognized and an all timme best award and it truly deserves this recognition and award...great job i realy enjoyed it and dont let others discourage you if you love to write
Comment Written 06-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2011
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Thank you so much for reading Harley's ongoing saga. He is an incredible little dog and I love to write about him! ~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is such a wonderful story. It really seems you know what Harley is doing. I feel that way too with my dog.Give Harley a hug and a kiss!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
This is such a wonderful story. It really seems you know what Harley is doing. I feel that way too with my dog.Give Harley a hug and a kiss!!! Debbie
Comment Written 06-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
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Debbie - Thank you so much for continuing to read Harley's saga and the BEAUTIFUL SIX STARS are icing on the cake. Writing about Harley and spending time with him are one of the best things in life! ~patty~
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece of narrative art that dwells on the life of a pet that experiences snow for the first time. You caught the emotions of Harley well. kudos
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
This is a nice piece of narrative art that dwells on the life of a pet that experiences snow for the first time. You caught the emotions of Harley well. kudos
Comment Written 06-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
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Thank you for continuing along with Harley's saga. The enjoyment of writing about our adventures together is a nice break from the technical writing I do for school. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
Comment from Espresso momma
I think Harley has it made in the shade, or snow...He is so adorable. I need to walk my girl, but the cold has kept me in. maybe next week. I'ts looking good. Thanks for the read.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
I think Harley has it made in the shade, or snow...He is so adorable. I need to walk my girl, but the cold has kept me in. maybe next week. I'ts looking good. Thanks for the read.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
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Thank you for continuing along with Harley's saga. The enjoyment of writing about our adventures together is a nice break from the technical writing I do for school. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
Comment from SkyBluePink
Harley sounds like a cutie pie! I love how you wrote this story! We have two dogs, and I remember each ones first snow experience.
The older one now, just doesn't want to get her feet wet in snow or rain, so we have found she can hold her you know what in for a record amount of hours. Nope, she won't go in the house. lol
Our other one, got to experience her first real snow last year, and each time it snowed, she barked at it. However, when it came to going outside, my man was the one who was exhausted, because she would just run and run and flip and flop. There was no stopping her!
You told your story in such a way, it came to life on the screen for me, and surfaced so many memories of our dogs snow adventures.
Thank you for sharing this with us! It is precious!
Keep Writing!
:)
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
Harley sounds like a cutie pie! I love how you wrote this story! We have two dogs, and I remember each ones first snow experience.
The older one now, just doesn't want to get her feet wet in snow or rain, so we have found she can hold her you know what in for a record amount of hours. Nope, she won't go in the house. lol
Our other one, got to experience her first real snow last year, and each time it snowed, she barked at it. However, when it came to going outside, my man was the one who was exhausted, because she would just run and run and flip and flop. There was no stopping her!
You told your story in such a way, it came to life on the screen for me, and surfaced so many memories of our dogs snow adventures.
Thank you for sharing this with us! It is precious!
Keep Writing!
:)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2011
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Thank you for continuing along with Harley's saga. The enjoyment of writing about our adventures together is a nice break from the technical writing I do for school. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
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You are so welcome!