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Daddy's Little Girl

Relationship between father and daughter

15 total reviews 
Comment from Ann Smith
Exceptional
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Oh how beautiful this is. This is not only a poem but a story of an unconditional love between a daughter and her dad. The details of the relationship are clear and keep the poem moving. I especially like the stanza about lying in the grass and looking at the clouds. Good luck with the contest. ann

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
    Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks and a 6 star rating. So greatly appreciated!
Comment from Gideon Roth
Excellent
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Wow, this was a well written but emotional read. This is an entry that will resonate with almost any father that loves his little girls as much as your daddy did and I do. Best of success with this. It should do very well...Gideon

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
    thank you for your wonderful comments.
Comment from RebelRose
Excellent
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I am not sure if this is more prose than free verse poetry. Since I am not that accomplished in my knowledge of the difference, I will judge it as it was presented ... as poetry. It is a very sweet and loving work. Your love for your father became real in your words. I know that feeling.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
    I wasn't quite sure of the difference in prose or free verse either. Hopefully others will agree, as you, that it is just a poem written from the heart. Thank you.
Comment from cooknnana
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I was actually enjoying this poem...until it cut off, lol I'm jealous of little girls who had this kind of relationship with their fathers. I didn't, but it makes me glad that there are good daddies out there. I hope this is describing your dad. Keep going; I would love to see it when it's finished.

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 Comment Written 14-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
    All done, I think. Let me know what you think of it now. And, yes, luckily, my dad and I were very close.
Comment from bowls
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It's a lovely beginning to what I'm sure will eventually be a really splendid poem. In line three you might want to correct the spelling of waltzing.

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2010


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2010
    thank you. I'll check my spelling and hopefully you will read and review this again. I think it's done.