To ALL..FS Friends, Fans, Writers.
Wishing you subtly cheerful moments27 total reviews
Comment from joemass
G'day Ronni
And a happy and blessed Christmas to you and yours, too!
A couple of small cookies that came out a bit misshapen, I think: . l5 'reminices' should be 'reminiscences'
In the last line I think you could impprove it by altering the order of your words: 'all the moreprecious' is surely nearer the way we would usually say it?
Anyway, have a good one!
Joemass
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
G'day Ronni
And a happy and blessed Christmas to you and yours, too!
A couple of small cookies that came out a bit misshapen, I think: . l5 'reminices' should be 'reminiscences'
In the last line I think you could impprove it by altering the order of your words: 'all the moreprecious' is surely nearer the way we would usually say it?
Anyway, have a good one!
Joemass
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you joe. Merry Christmas to you too.
Comment from Deejharrington
Thank you for the beautiful and heart-felt wish for the coming season. Though I am not a Christian, I enjoy the loving feelings and warm feelings that you are wishing all of us here. May I say I wish you the same, and may you be surrounded by only people you love and that love you. Happy Holidays!
dj
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
Thank you for the beautiful and heart-felt wish for the coming season. Though I am not a Christian, I enjoy the loving feelings and warm feelings that you are wishing all of us here. May I say I wish you the same, and may you be surrounded by only people you love and that love you. Happy Holidays!
dj
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you D. J. for the kind review, and your warm wishes.
Hope your Holidays are terrific too. Thanks for the support.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Thank you Roni,
for you wonderful Christmas wish make one fee very cheerful and happy they read and reviewed your poem
Gert
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
Thank you Roni,
for you wonderful Christmas wish make one fee very cheerful and happy they read and reviewed your poem
Gert
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you Gert, and very best wishes to you too for the Holidays.
Appreciate the thoughtful review. God Bless!
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you are welcome Roni
Gert
Comment from ArtGal
This is so thoughful of you and even though we don't know each other, I appreciate reading this like everyone else. And I wish you and yours a very happy Holiday Season! I'm happy to see that you ended this with what's most important at Christmas, "The Divine's Love and most sacred Gift. His Beloved Son, each year, precious all the more!" This is all so lovely to read, thanks!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
This is so thoughful of you and even though we don't know each other, I appreciate reading this like everyone else. And I wish you and yours a very happy Holiday Season! I'm happy to see that you ended this with what's most important at Christmas, "The Divine's Love and most sacred Gift. His Beloved Son, each year, precious all the more!" This is all so lovely to read, thanks!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you ArtGal, for the terrific review, warm wishes and
generous compliments! Sincerely appreciated. Indeed, the
true celebration is for the Birthday of Jesus. Blessings to
you and yours.
Comment from jbuley
This is beautifully written, so glad you can be a part of something positive that you really enjoy. Thank you for all your beautiful work!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
This is beautifully written, so glad you can be a part of something positive that you really enjoy. Thank you for all your beautiful work!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you for your kind review and sincere compliments. Very
much appreciated. Blessings to you and yours.
Comment from words
Loved your Christmas card to FS members.
I echo your sentiments.
Especially liked:
Wishing you subtly cheerful moments of fun,
laughter, surprise and sweet reminices. Countless
gentle dreams, abiding appreciations sweetly
endeared. A heart filled with sentimental
smiles, warm hugs and jovial toasts.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
Loved your Christmas card to FS members.
I echo your sentiments.
Especially liked:
Wishing you subtly cheerful moments of fun,
laughter, surprise and sweet reminices. Countless
gentle dreams, abiding appreciations sweetly
endeared. A heart filled with sentimental
smiles, warm hugs and jovial toasts.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you words, for your warm review; and the sentiments you
especially liked. Sincerely appreciated. Blessings to you
and yours for the Holidays!
Comment from dragonpoet
Flowing writing of thanks and cheer for the season. Thank you for the wonderful Christmas card. Much better than any that can be purchased.
I see no errors.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
Flowing writing of thanks and cheer for the season. Thank you for the wonderful Christmas card. Much better than any that can be purchased.
I see no errors.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you for the thoughtful review and kind wishes. Sincerely
appreciated. Have a beutiful Holiday!
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Your welcome and Merry Christmas to you too.
dragonpoet
Comment from Dklrdmcches
very well done. I love the warmth that I felt as I read your well crafted piece. This was enchanting and sweet. may the new year be good to you...DKLRD
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
very well done. I love the warmth that I felt as I read your well crafted piece. This was enchanting and sweet. may the new year be good to you...DKLRD
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you DKLRD, for your touching review, your warm wishes and
kind compliments. Sincerely appreciated. Have a splendid
Christmas and a terrific New Year too.
Comment from Abba Lin
Hi ronnie, what a beautiful message to all of us.. Your poem and words touched my heart and the best part of it was giving Christ the glory He deserves... Merry Christmas.. Love Lin
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
Hi ronnie, what a beautiful message to all of us.. Your poem and words touched my heart and the best part of it was giving Christ the glory He deserves... Merry Christmas.. Love Lin
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you Abba Lin, for your kind and gracious review, and
your warm wishes. Indeed, we know the glory Christ deserves.
Have a most wondrous Christmas and happiest of New years.
Comment from tonydem
Very sweet of you Ronnie to wish us all the best this holiday season with your beautiful, heartfelt verse. May I return to you the same wishes for a happy and safe holiday season and may the new year bring you and yours good health, inspiration and joy.
Tony
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
Very sweet of you Ronnie to wish us all the best this holiday season with your beautiful, heartfelt verse. May I return to you the same wishes for a happy and safe holiday season and may the new year bring you and yours good health, inspiration and joy.
Tony
Comment Written 11-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2009
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Thank you Tony, for your warm thoughts and kind review. Very
sincerely appreciated. Best to you and yours, and hope you
have a most resplendent Christmas and happiest of New Years!