Zee is not into Baby Love
A ZeeZee audio Story22 total reviews
Comment from mstad55
There's an expression we in the south use when things don't go our way. I'll have to clean it up a bit, bein, I'm spouting off to a lady and all. But, Bull fudge and pigs testicles, the sound wouldn't play. Okay, I'm calm now. Thanks for the bedtime story. Night night. M
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2009
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There's an expression we in the south use when things don't go our way. I'll have to clean it up a bit, bein, I'm spouting off to a lady and all. But, Bull fudge and pigs testicles, the sound wouldn't play. Okay, I'm calm now. Thanks for the bedtime story. Night night. M
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2009
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Bull fudge.. is that like Bull Shit? Hmmmm Thanks for the review.. Mr Mr. M. ZeeZee
Comment from c_lucas
I see you humor is in full bloom. Very well written with a smooth flow of words making for an easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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I see you humor is in full bloom. Very well written with a smooth flow of words making for an easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Hi C. I am on a roll. Better than being on a donut. Thanks for reading. Zee
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You go girl! Charlie
Comment from babylonia
zeezee,
i did listen. you've done another great job. easy to read and listen to. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. made me smile. made me laugh. LOL i don't want to change a baby man's shitty diaper either unless he is in a coma. then i might hire someone. :P
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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zeezee,
i did listen. you've done another great job. easy to read and listen to. no spaggies. imagery is excellent. made me smile. made me laugh. LOL i don't want to change a baby man's shitty diaper either unless he is in a coma. then i might hire someone. :P
love,
barbara
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Ahh heck honey.. you always make my day. Thanks much. Zee
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zeezee,
you do the same for me. we are definitely kindred souls.
:P
love,
barbara
Comment from rldumont
I laughed out loud. ZeeZee is brash, smart and funny. You tell her story as if all the misbehaving is normal stuff and everyone is doing it. Steeling the chef's recipe seems perfectly logical.
Returning the handbag after throwing up in it was classic. From ZeeZee's perspective, it makes sense.
Keep it up.
rld
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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I laughed out loud. ZeeZee is brash, smart and funny. You tell her story as if all the misbehaving is normal stuff and everyone is doing it. Steeling the chef's recipe seems perfectly logical.
Returning the handbag after throwing up in it was classic. From ZeeZee's perspective, it makes sense.
Keep it up.
rld
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Hi rid.. I may steal your comments for a book review, if and when..But I will warn you first. Thank you for this most encouraging review. You are most generous. ZeeZee
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I'd love to be quoted as a book reviewer. Of course, we'd have to fancy up my resume with some letters after my name. We could make them up, like Richard DuMont ZZF,etc. They wouldn't have to know it stood for Zee Zee fan.
rld
Comment from adewpearl
the drone laying next to me should be lying
I love the description of the in crowd as those more interested in being seen at an eatery than eating
Infantasia, there is a writer on site who writes about that crap, pun intended - sounds about as sexy to me as maggots.
I enjoy reading and hearing the spoken word both. I like it when you add the audio component but still read along.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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the drone laying next to me should be lying
I love the description of the in crowd as those more interested in being seen at an eatery than eating
Infantasia, there is a writer on site who writes about that crap, pun intended - sounds about as sexy to me as maggots.
I enjoy reading and hearing the spoken word both. I like it when you add the audio component but still read along.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Thanks Brooke, I went back and fixed it. Thanks for reading and listening. I keep experimenting with the audio part. Thanks much. ZeeZee
Comment from jojosug
Sorry, I couldn't get the audio to work, probably my poor computer skills, rather then anything else. Shame, it would have been nice to listen to your voice. As usual, I loved your story the way that you don't give a shit and say it how you see it. Brilliantly written.
Jo
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Sorry, I couldn't get the audio to work, probably my poor computer skills, rather then anything else. Shame, it would have been nice to listen to your voice. As usual, I loved your story the way that you don't give a shit and say it how you see it. Brilliantly written.
Jo
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Thank you for reading Jo. I keep experimenting with the audio. You most likely do not have any sound drivers. (Like I am an expert - not) Thanks much. Zee
Comment from Aleksandramarie
breath threaten to burn my scalp. * threatened
The crowd more concerned with being seen in an eatery than actually eating.
LOL sometimes I wonder if we live in the same chicago
LOL.... this would make a great cartoon...in a good way. I laughed at least five times.
grins... smooth and to the point...what a character.
msp
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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breath threaten to burn my scalp. * threatened
The crowd more concerned with being seen in an eatery than actually eating.
LOL sometimes I wonder if we live in the same chicago
LOL.... this would make a great cartoon...in a good way. I laughed at least five times.
grins... smooth and to the point...what a character.
msp
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Thank you so much msp. Hearing you tell me that you laughed is music to my ears. I will go back and fix the spaggie. I am most appreciative. Zee
Comment from Charles Augustus
You certainly can put words together, and your symbolism works great. The overall view of Zee Zee's personality comes across well.
To be frank, there's not enough here to warrant a story. This would make a good introduction. You've made a sandwich here, but somehow left the meat out. The term is infantalism not infantasia by the way.
I would like to see more of this rather unique character, but you need to take me somewhere and show me something.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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You certainly can put words together, and your symbolism works great. The overall view of Zee Zee's personality comes across well.
To be frank, there's not enough here to warrant a story. This would make a good introduction. You've made a sandwich here, but somehow left the meat out. The term is infantalism not infantasia by the way.
I would like to see more of this rather unique character, but you need to take me somewhere and show me something.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Hi Charles. I googled and got Infantasia..so I must have missed on my search. With some enormous luck.. I will have short stories designed for entertainment in short reads. Each encapsulated with the same characters interacting with each other in different settings.
Thank you so much for your comments. I appreciate hearing your take on the short story.. Audio files are restricted in size. I deliberately kept this small for that reason.
Thanks Zee
Comment from lola29
"If one is to dish the dirt - one tends to get dirty," I guess we are all lurking in fertilizer. I'm curious about your publishing aspirations and why you feel dubious about your postings. If I may be so bold as to ask, do you have a favorite author or genre?
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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"If one is to dish the dirt - one tends to get dirty," I guess we are all lurking in fertilizer. I'm curious about your publishing aspirations and why you feel dubious about your postings. If I may be so bold as to ask, do you have a favorite author or genre?
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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I enjoy reading Robert B Parker's character Spenser. Dialogue driven, spending more time on Spenser's emotions and attitude than on description of people and places.
I prefer to write comedy, but will write a dramatic story of Zee and her crew on occasion, they tend to be more violent in nature. Not for the faint of heart.
My character is street-wise broad turned Society Dame. An R-Rated Auntie Mame, if you will. My concern is if and when publisher ever agrees to take a look at my work .. if they will be turned away due to my having posted the stories here.
Trust me.. this has been a hard call for me. I need to find out the likability of the characters and my style .. without sabotaging my chances of being picked up by a publisher.
My characters are so liquid, they can live on for years. Their interaction is infinite in stories. I took time to think these issue out.
I've written entertaining stories as simple as Zee Zee running out of peanut butter. The topic is secondary. The interaction is paramount.
When the characters are real and lovable, the rest is easy. Geez, sorry, I seem to be rattling on. Thanks much. Zee
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Thank you for being so obliging. There is just 'something' about you.
Comment from Thesis
A true researcher, willing to get in there to get the grist for the story. Keeping a towel in the car is priceless.
A very resourceful woman who knows what she wants and goes after it. A good story, I have to go back and read from the beginning. - Thesis
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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A true researcher, willing to get in there to get the grist for the story. Keeping a towel in the car is priceless.
A very resourceful woman who knows what she wants and goes after it. A good story, I have to go back and read from the beginning. - Thesis
Comment Written 25-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2009
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Hi Thesis. I am most pleased you enjoyed the story enough to go back. Thank you so much for taking time to review this little piece. ZeeZee
