The Spirit of Balu
A Pastiche..to honor a writer with inspired piece16 total reviews
Comment from Kingsland
you have written this piece with a beautiful music in its poetic sounds. I liked reading this piece as it was so easy to read.It just flowed off of my tongue like ambrosia. This was a very beautiful piece of poetic art to have read and reviewed... John
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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you have written this piece with a beautiful music in its poetic sounds. I liked reading this piece as it was so easy to read.It just flowed off of my tongue like ambrosia. This was a very beautiful piece of poetic art to have read and reviewed... John
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Gosh John, what a lovely thing to say. Your review alone made this poem worth writing. Thank you for the very complimentary review. Helvi :o)
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Helvi. I've missed reading your poetry over the last few months. This is a beautiful pastiche with some stunning imagery. Good luck with this
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Hi Helvi. I've missed reading your poetry over the last few months. This is a beautiful pastiche with some stunning imagery. Good luck with this
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Hi my friend, I remember you saying, "When I see a Helvi poem I know it's going to be special." Kinder words were never spoken. I've always felt honored by your reviews. I'm so happy to hear from you again. Bless You, Helvi :o)
Comment from laurelp
I think that you did a beautiful job with or without the inspiration of another person's works. Your poem was rich in thought and imagery. Very well done.
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I think that you did a beautiful job with or without the inspiration of another person's works. Your poem was rich in thought and imagery. Very well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2009
Comment from judiblaze
This is so spiritual and wonderful. You certainly were able to get the message across in a most powerful way. I believe you should win the contest. But, alas, there are a couple of things...
you now", the----comma inside quotation marks
"Please! Don't! Wait!", --no comma needed here
good job and best of luck
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This is so spiritual and wonderful. You certainly were able to get the message across in a most powerful way. I believe you should win the contest. But, alas, there are a couple of things...
you now", the----comma inside quotation marks
"Please! Don't! Wait!", --no comma needed here
good job and best of luck
Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
Comment from joan marie
I wonder if we will know right away if we have passed. Will we wander some not believing? And will we feel that we have the right to enter Heaven even though we know God is all forgiving? Lots to think about. joan marie
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I wonder if we will know right away if we have passed. Will we wander some not believing? And will we feel that we have the right to enter Heaven even though we know God is all forgiving? Lots to think about. joan marie
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
Comment from Jewell McChesney
ooooooooooh! I LOVE THIS
Wish I could give it a six star review but alas, I cannot.
You have captured the essence of the original poem and added your unique flavor!
Do you know the artist of the photo used? I really like that one!
Smilez,
J
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
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ooooooooooh! I LOVE THIS
Wish I could give it a six star review but alas, I cannot.
You have captured the essence of the original poem and added your unique flavor!
Do you know the artist of the photo used? I really like that one!
Smilez,
J
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Comment Written 17-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2009
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Hi Jewel, DO I KNOW THE ARTIST OF THE PHOTO? How soon they forget. IT"S YOU SILLY!!!! I couldn't think of a better image than this. You wrote a very pretty poem for me using this very photo. I saw it at FA and fell n love with it. I think it was a perfect fit. Thank you for the wonderful review my friend. I am so happy I got to use one of your photos to complete it. Thank you for thinking it deserves a six. You have made my day!!! Congratulations for being a nominee for poem of the month. You definately deserve the honor. Hugs, Helvi
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I was only kidding about the photo. hehe. you DID KNOW that didn't you? You are so special.I hope you voted for me haha.
I haven't voted yet, but I know yours is definitely going to be one of the contenders. How could it NOT?
Love You,
Helvi :o)
