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Mom and Dad Shortess

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Comment from MelB
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A very nice poem about your time with family in PA. Good aabb rhyme. There are a couple lines that are a little choppy, but overall good flow. So nice that you have wonderful family to spend the holidays with.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thank you Melissa. I feel the very same way! I am thankful every day for them! Blessings, Teri
Comment from damommy
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It sounds like a great place to go. I'm happy you enjoy it so much.

Thanks for sharing this and the photo with us. It's puts a "face" on things you talk about.

It's nice to have in-laws that you love.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thank you my friend. Yes it is very nice to have them. Blessings, Teri
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks for sharing one of those precious memories of spending time with those you love. Sometimes, those memories are about all that keep up sane. Of course for me it didn't work. LOL! Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    lol Thanks Ric for the great review. They are amazing and good people! I am truly blessed! Teri
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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This is brilliant and beautiful. Imaginative and excellent choices of words to convey a beautiful message. I love the way this can be applied to any family.Well done this is truly amazing , kind regards,meia

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much Meia for the great review. It was a wonderful time! Blessings, Teri
Comment from heyjude
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Teri, what a wonderful poem. It is great to see our family and
sometimes we can't see them for long periods of time. That
just makes the time together even sweeter. Glad you could
enjoy Christmas with them.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thank you Judy for the great review. It was a truly blessed time at Christmas! I think it is always more special because it is in Bethlehem, PA. love, Teri
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wonderful memories which will be will you forever and recorded in your lovely poem. These moments are so precious, especially as they cannot always be repeated, lovely sentiments, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much Dolly for the great review. It was a wonderful time! Blessings, Teri
Comment from patcelaw
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Teri, this is a lovely poem about your visits to see Tom's parents and your love for them. I am glad you got to go there for Christmas. I know you had a lovely time. Patricia

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thank you my friend! It was a very good time seeing them and Timothy, Anne and Jeremy. love, Teri
Comment from Bill Schott
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This is a fun time captured for posterity. Enjoying relatives is something sometimes don't appreciate until we can't. This is a great capture of a good memory.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2017

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2017
    Thank you so much Bill for the great review! It was a wonderful time with family! Blessings, Teri
Comment from penelope
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Ah, there's nothing like home, Teri. At least that's the way it should be. Sadly it's not like that for so many. Your poem is bright, cheerful and leaves me with a positive feeling, you've created some positive mood scenes here. I wish you luck in the contest. Penelope

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2008

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from gbyrne
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The verse does nor flow easily for me. Also feel that the poem should be expanded a little to really have an impact on the reader.

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2008

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2008
    What were you trying to say in the first sentence. The does nor flow easily for me.

    Did you mean not?