Lady Detective
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Epilogue"Suspense crime novel with romance.
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Comment from Rajasir
Honestly, the present chapter does not give me any point to express my views against it.It is perfect and the flow is superb, however, I could have added a few words of appreciation had I read the preceding chapters as well.
Bless you,
Rajasir
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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Honestly, the present chapter does not give me any point to express my views against it.It is perfect and the flow is superb, however, I could have added a few words of appreciation had I read the preceding chapters as well.
Bless you,
Rajasir
Comment Written 12-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you for reading
Comment from RenieReader
PERFECTION! I would love to see a sequel to this one. You had me hooked right from the beginning and it just kept getting better and more intense. You have a great talent for the crime mystery genre and it shows.
Hope to hear from you again very soon.
Renie
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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PERFECTION! I would love to see a sequel to this one. You had me hooked right from the beginning and it just kept getting better and more intense. You have a great talent for the crime mystery genre and it shows.
Hope to hear from you again very soon.
Renie
Comment Written 12-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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working on the next storyline, though I thought maybe to take a small break and work on my romance novel a little. who knows. thank you for all the stars and the encouragement.
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Elaine :)
An excellent epilogue..You seem to have tied the loose ends together. I do thing there should be a few words explaining how Ruckus survived the gunshot.
Now that the book is finished, the hard work starts. That's the marketing process, finding an agent and making revisions that may be necessary for publication. Good luck at the writer's conference.
Roger
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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Hi Elaine :)
An excellent epilogue..You seem to have tied the loose ends together. I do thing there should be a few words explaining how Ruckus survived the gunshot.
Now that the book is finished, the hard work starts. That's the marketing process, finding an agent and making revisions that may be necessary for publication. Good luck at the writer's conference.
Roger
Comment Written 12-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you. thank you. I will probably go back and add more to this about Ruckus and Mark and maybe explain more about Burly's injuries and the internal investigation.
thank you for the luck at the writer's conference, I am getting excited. I am also keeping my fingers crossed that my manuscript goes over as well with them as it did on here.
You have been here for me since the beginning, THANK YOU!!!
I will never be able to thank my loyal readers enough.
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Hi Elaine :)
I enjoy helping people who want to learn. I always hope my suggestions will work.
I will give Marilyn yor cell phone number when she goes to Georgia
Roger
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I am looking forward to meeting her. I am so excited about going in general, I think I have butterflies.
Thank you again for all the help you have given me along the way, I can't express that enough. I have learned so much through the writing of this book and it has been a tough but very fun adventure. I hope to continue writing stuff that people want to read.
Comment from heyjude
mcdaniel,
I guess you could do a chapter on the wedding. It's hard to know
exactly when to end it. I think this is a good way to end it. Maybe you could do a series. I've enjoyed going on the journey with you.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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mcdaniel,
I guess you could do a chapter on the wedding. It's hard to know
exactly when to end it. I think this is a good way to end it. Maybe you could do a series. I've enjoyed going on the journey with you.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you for reading, you have been a very loyal reader. They may get married in the next book, who knows. I left it open with another case, I may see if I can continue this as a series
Comment from GerryMacNeil
Good job! Congratulations on bringing it home! Truly a fine novel! Not sure if your Author Notes are asking if you should extend the story--only you know that. This ending seems fine and wholly satisfactory to me! Gerry
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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Good job! Congratulations on bringing it home! Truly a fine novel! Not sure if your Author Notes are asking if you should extend the story--only you know that. This ending seems fine and wholly satisfactory to me! Gerry
Comment Written 11-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you for reading. I don't even recall what my author notes say, I'll have to go back and read them.
thank you for going on this journey with me, it was a fun ride.
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You betcha! Gerry
Comment from FlaFaerie
Hello there
ooooooooh.. love the ending!!
It was perfect for them to get together.. without pushing it out in the face.. I love it!!!!!
And you left it open enough if you wish to continue with her, which is a smart idea.. lady detectives are very popular.. and she's just fiesty and cute all together.. and Ryan could be very helpful in certain situations..
hugs!!!
luck with the submission
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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Hello there
ooooooooh.. love the ending!!
It was perfect for them to get together.. without pushing it out in the face.. I love it!!!!!
And you left it open enough if you wish to continue with her, which is a smart idea.. lady detectives are very popular.. and she's just fiesty and cute all together.. and Ryan could be very helpful in certain situations..
hugs!!!
luck with the submission
Comment Written 11-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you for being a loyal reader and a great friend. I think I will work with these characters again, but I might work on the other story I started first, who knows.
thank you again for reading
Oh, and I promise not to be so mean to her in the next book-but there will be plenty of action and mystery.
Comment from butterflykiss
It was a great book. It kept the reader guessing as to who the villain was then why. It was a mystery that kept you guessing from one installment to the next, with a little bit of fun and love thrown in to mix things up. I enjoyed and looked forward to reading each chapter.
Good luck.
Butterflykiss
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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It was a great book. It kept the reader guessing as to who the villain was then why. It was a mystery that kept you guessing from one installment to the next, with a little bit of fun and love thrown in to mix things up. I enjoyed and looked forward to reading each chapter.
Good luck.
Butterflykiss
Comment Written 11-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you for reading, and reading.
It was a fun ride, one that I am almost sad it's over.
thank you again
Comment from savannah cat
I think you have a wonderful story. I hate to see it end. Burly and Ruckus are great characters. All of the characters were great. I hope to see it continue or become a sequel. I will truly miss reading it. Good luck with publishing it.
Savannah Cat
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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I think you have a wonderful story. I hate to see it end. Burly and Ruckus are great characters. All of the characters were great. I hope to see it continue or become a sequel. I will truly miss reading it. Good luck with publishing it.
Savannah Cat
Comment Written 11-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you for reading and all the encouragement. Fingers crossed, I have already sent this out.
Comment from empire76
I can tell there could be more. What with the kid who only wants to talk to her. I have enjoyed your story very much. Congratulations on finishing it. Good luck with publishing.
- They walked to his Camaro hand(-)in(-)hand.
Thanks for sharing your book with us
Empi
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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I can tell there could be more. What with the kid who only wants to talk to her. I have enjoyed your story very much. Congratulations on finishing it. Good luck with publishing.
- They walked to his Camaro hand(-)in(-)hand.
Thanks for sharing your book with us
Empi
Comment Written 11-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you for reading and all your constructive criticism along the way. It is greatly appreciated. I couldn't have gotten this far without you and a couple other people, I am truly grateful.
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You are most welcome
Comment from IamSpook
Hello mcdaniel1299,
Nicely written. It makes me want to go back and read the book.
A good book always has an excellent ending. You managed to have an ending with closure, yet open another story to be told. Good job.
Observation:
"Yes, sir," she said into the receiver, then listened.
"Yes, sir," she said into the receiver (and) listened. - personal preference.
Best Regards,
Mark
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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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Hello mcdaniel1299,
Nicely written. It makes me want to go back and read the book.
A good book always has an excellent ending. You managed to have an ending with closure, yet open another story to be told. Good job.
Observation:
"Yes, sir," she said into the receiver, then listened.
"Yes, sir," she said into the receiver (and) listened. - personal preference.
Best Regards,
Mark
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2008
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thank you for reading. It has been a fun adventure and now it is over, maybe.
