Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Dear Wall"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
35 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
HI PUPA, Yes I like your thoughts, I have often wondered what goes on behind the walls of peoples homes,especially when it night time as I driving down a quite street .
Wonderful images you have protrayed
thanks for sharing your well written free verse.
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007
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HI PUPA, Yes I like your thoughts, I have often wondered what goes on behind the walls of peoples homes,especially when it night time as I driving down a quite street .
Wonderful images you have protrayed
thanks for sharing your well written free verse.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007
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Hi Gert,
Yes, I often did the same thing and kept wondering. Thank you for a lovely review and rating.
Pupa
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HI PUPA you are so welcome
Gert
Comment from diane24
Dear Pupa,
This is a very insightful and well written poem
that I'm sure is touching all who read it. Yes,
we do give too much credance to walls; mostly
for self-protection, how sad of us.
I enjoyed reading this a lot.
diane
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007
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Dear Pupa,
This is a very insightful and well written poem
that I'm sure is touching all who read it. Yes,
we do give too much credance to walls; mostly
for self-protection, how sad of us.
I enjoyed reading this a lot.
diane
Comment Written 15-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007
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Diane, thank you so much for your encouraging review and kind comments.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Pupa
Comment from Penpal
This piece captures the lonlines of time and portrays the walls between that lonliness which could be lifted, bringing fulfillment and hunger quenched. Well done. I'd give a six for this had I one left to give. Very expressive within its lovely content.
Sallysaucer
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007
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This piece captures the lonlines of time and portrays the walls between that lonliness which could be lifted, bringing fulfillment and hunger quenched. Well done. I'd give a six for this had I one left to give. Very expressive within its lovely content.
Sallysaucer
Comment Written 15-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2007
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Hi Sallysaucer,
Appreciate very much your lovely review and kind rating.Your comments are considered a sixer to me. Thank you.
Pupa
Comment from P1
this is brilliant. isnt amazing how now that
you have said the words they seeem so obvious
ya just kinda say yes its true, so true. i
really enjoyed this read, loved the content
and the semtiment, though sad was enjoyable.
have to tell ya when i saw the title shirley
valentine came to mind but it was nothing ike it lol.
hugs lynda.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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this is brilliant. isnt amazing how now that
you have said the words they seeem so obvious
ya just kinda say yes its true, so true. i
really enjoyed this read, loved the content
and the semtiment, though sad was enjoyable.
have to tell ya when i saw the title shirley
valentine came to mind but it was nothing ike it lol.
hugs lynda.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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Lynda, your encouraging comments really mean a lot to me.
I remeber that film, when she used to sit alone talking to her wall!! I had just arrived to England to stay for a few years.
Take care.
Pupa
Comment from nora arjuna
Hello Pupa. Another great piece to add to your collection. The wall can protect us, it also can separate us from what could be. I watch a movie where a couple met but lost contact. They kept searching for each other, not knowing they were only separated by a wall. It took an earthquake for them to meet again.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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Hello Pupa. Another great piece to add to your collection. The wall can protect us, it also can separate us from what could be. I watch a movie where a couple met but lost contact. They kept searching for each other, not knowing they were only separated by a wall. It took an earthquake for them to meet again.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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Wow, that is an interesting story arjuna, thanks for sharing it.
Appreciate you lovely comments and kind rating.
Take care my friend.
Pupa
Comment from milushka
As I connect all to music or to a song, my dear PUPA, Eleanor Righby will be with me all day, I can see.
Hauntingly sad and touching. The lives behind walls we know nothing about until tha wall falls.
Love you.
Mila
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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As I connect all to music or to a song, my dear PUPA, Eleanor Righby will be with me all day, I can see.
Hauntingly sad and touching. The lives behind walls we know nothing about until tha wall falls.
Love you.
Mila
Comment Written 15-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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Mila,
That's it, or an earthquake! Thanks for your lovely review and rating.
Glad you stopped by.
Pupa
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Yes, I see all that, I don't want to die all walled in.
I see a pigeon on my balcony, such hope, dearest PUPA.
Love,
Mila
Comment from roger
Hello PUPA I would just like to say how much I enjoyed reading your poem. Very clever idea talking about walls, like you say some keep you in and some keep you out. Well done and thank you for sharing your poem with us.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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Hello PUPA I would just like to say how much I enjoyed reading your poem. Very clever idea talking about walls, like you say some keep you in and some keep you out. Well done and thank you for sharing your poem with us.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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You are most welcome, thank you for your reviewing and your comments are much appreciated. Glad to know you enjoyed it.
Pupa
Comment from CALLAHANMR
I love the pictures you paint with this piece of writing. The people and their emotions, the vivid pictures of loneliness, wondering what the woman is looking at in her album, and the recently bereaved widower. Hoping for a visit from his grown children. Such pain here, yet such beauty. One sees them, feels them. Robert Frost wrote something there is that doesn't love a wall. Did he mean this one as well?
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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I love the pictures you paint with this piece of writing. The people and their emotions, the vivid pictures of loneliness, wondering what the woman is looking at in her album, and the recently bereaved widower. Hoping for a visit from his grown children. Such pain here, yet such beauty. One sees them, feels them. Robert Frost wrote something there is that doesn't love a wall. Did he mean this one as well?
Comment Written 15-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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He might have, but I haven't heard him. I am so glad my poem has touched your feelings, this means so much to me. Thanks for a lovely review.
Pupa
Comment from Resident_Truth
This was such a powerful write and made me think of how many walls I have allowed to interfere with my life and those in it.
Much emotion and imagery....
look at you standing between them, hate you, wishing
you were invisible, to give those lonely people a chance
to talk, tell stories, listen, share, care, love and be loved.
Thanks so much pupa for making me see the walls...
Resident_Truth
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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This was such a powerful write and made me think of how many walls I have allowed to interfere with my life and those in it.
Much emotion and imagery....
look at you standing between them, hate you, wishing
you were invisible, to give those lonely people a chance
to talk, tell stories, listen, share, care, love and be loved.
Thanks so much pupa for making me see the walls...
Resident_Truth
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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You are most welcome, glad my poem had a positive effect on you. Thanks for all your encouraging comments and kind rating.
Pupa
Comment from Thayamax
What an interesting poem you have here. Two people suffering with loneliness when they could be of such comfort to each other. Damn wall! Someone should tear it down.
Good flow and great message in this poem. I like the progression of it and your words bring much emotion to the reader. Well done.
Thaya
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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What an interesting poem you have here. Two people suffering with loneliness when they could be of such comfort to each other. Damn wall! Someone should tear it down.
Good flow and great message in this poem. I like the progression of it and your words bring much emotion to the reader. Well done.
Thaya
Comment Written 14-Nov-2007
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2007
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Thaya, thanks for such a lovely review and rating. Much appreciated
Pupa
