Spring and the heart
What do you prefer? Let me know14 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This tanka, Spring, has the proper formatting and widens the power of the presentation of bright flowers to the entire view of the world and with broadens the impact on all.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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This tanka, Spring, has the proper formatting and widens the power of the presentation of bright flowers to the entire view of the world and with broadens the impact on all.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Wow. Thanks!
Comment from royowen
This is a very good post and a great entry I this tanks poetry contest. Your pivot line joins the other four extremely well, you've got a very good chance in this competition, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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This is a very good post and a great entry I this tanks poetry contest. Your pivot line joins the other four extremely well, you've got a very good chance in this competition, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thanks Roy. Had a hard time getting reviews on this one. I think people took offense. Live and learn. So I really appreciate your kind words and encouragement.
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I'm sorry, the most reviews I've had on a single post is 145, with 80 or more common, those days are gone.
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Sounds like progress to me👍
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Yep
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Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
A charming, well written in the Tanka form.
'ever timely birth
bouquets heal the deepest hurt
of a breaking heart
with no judgement I prefer
mine unpredictably wild'
Beautiful words. Good luck in the contest x
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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A charming, well written in the Tanka form.
'ever timely birth
bouquets heal the deepest hurt
of a breaking heart
with no judgement I prefer
mine unpredictably wild'
Beautiful words. Good luck in the contest x
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much Shirley
I appreciate your kind words!
Comment from Mark Jackson
That is fantastic and a different approach to spring. I particularly like the use of 'no judgement' before breaking the news you prefer free range to battery flowers (so to speak).
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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That is fantastic and a different approach to spring. I particularly like the use of 'no judgement' before breaking the news you prefer free range to battery flowers (so to speak).
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review!
