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A special key to happiness
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Comment from
RodG
This story should delight young readers.
Great name chosen--Sparkle Bunny. We can easily visualize that glitter shooting from his ears.
So nice to see a happy ending.
Rod
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
Thank you for stopping by to read this silly story...but yes, a little sparkle in one's day and maybe a smile can do wonders for even the adults. Appreciate the review. Have a great day!
Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
This is fun! I love the image and your flash fiction captured the personality and colours of this bunny so well. A very vivid post that children would love. Good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2024
Thanks so much, Debbie. It's difficult to add excitement and fun in fifty words, but I think (or hope) the use of vivid colors and shooting glitter helped the reader out. Have a great day!
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