Love Struck and Besotted
Twitterpated19 total reviews
Comment from GoWiSt
"Twitterpated" Is that like constipated in a twitter way? LOL
Nice complementary picture art choice.
Nicely met this naani contest's requirements for line and syllable count.
Nice romantic sentiment expressed here--of undying love. Good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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"Twitterpated" Is that like constipated in a twitter way? LOL
Nice complementary picture art choice.
Nicely met this naani contest's requirements for line and syllable count.
Nice romantic sentiment expressed here--of undying love. Good luck!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Glad you liked it
Thank you
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt. The retelling of a lovely sentiment in poem form. The photograph is wonderful and does indeed give the feeling of twitterpation. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Naani Poem writing prompt. The retelling of a lovely sentiment in poem form. The photograph is wonderful and does indeed give the feeling of twitterpation. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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To win one first has to enter
Then to improve your chance to win hire a gun and take the competition out
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That was very nice. But I am very sure I have heard it before:
One phrase in particular became popular in the 1900's, from the poem written by Rosemonde Gerard; addressed to her beloved husband Edmond Rostand, the famous French writer of Cyrano de Bergerac; 'Moins qu'hier, plus que demain'. This French written love phrase, translates to I love you more (+) than yesterday but less (-) than tomorrow. A beautiful phrase that resembles an ever-growing love.
There are five or six that differ slightly. Yours is good too. Karen
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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That was very nice. But I am very sure I have heard it before:
One phrase in particular became popular in the 1900's, from the poem written by Rosemonde Gerard; addressed to her beloved husband Edmond Rostand, the famous French writer of Cyrano de Bergerac; 'Moins qu'hier, plus que demain'. This French written love phrase, translates to I love you more (+) than yesterday but less (-) than tomorrow. A beautiful phrase that resembles an ever-growing love.
There are five or six that differ slightly. Yours is good too. Karen
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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There may very well be; but mine is a Horonziism, and the only one of its kind thought of, written down and drew a smile from my wife!
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There may very well be; but mine is a Horonziism, and the only one of its kind thought of, written down and drew a smile from my wife!
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There may very well be; but mine is a Horonziism, and the only one of its kind thought of, written down and drew a smile from my wife!
Comment from Mark Jackson
I like this, When I read it I thought it was going to be an ever-growing love thing that makes you think. I am however quite happy that it wasn't, it was simpler and purer. I like it a Naani should be about human relations and this of course is.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I like this, When I read it I thought it was going to be an ever-growing love thing that makes you think. I am however quite happy that it wasn't, it was simpler and purer. I like it a Naani should be about human relations and this of course is.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Welcome to my ramblings. I hope you'll return. I write an olio of this and that, and recently began a series of short stories "From a Demented Mind"
P.S. - i released another moments ago.
Thanks.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely Naani poem about the twitter patter of love, today, tomorrow, always. A lovely photo of your daughter and son-in-law and I enjoyed your notes.
Good luck in the contest, your words left me smiling.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely Naani poem about the twitter patter of love, today, tomorrow, always. A lovely photo of your daughter and son-in-law and I enjoyed your notes.
Good luck in the contest, your words left me smiling.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Welcome back - to my ramblings. I hope you'll return ore often. I write an olio of this and that, and recently began a series of short stories "From a Demented Mind"
P.S. - I released another moments ago.
Thanks.
Comment from kahpot
This is so beautiful, in so few words and in this quite difficult form you have told of true and forever love, an excellent naani poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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This is so beautiful, in so few words and in this quite difficult form you have told of true and forever love, an excellent naani poem, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thanks K.P.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a lasting love as long as these two lovers stay on the same page then their love will stand the test of time, a fun post, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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This sounds like a lasting love as long as these two lovers stay on the same page then their love will stand the test of time, a fun post, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Well, she could leave, but won't, and even if she did, i would continue eternally feeling as I did/do.
Comment from Julie Helms
Twitterpated is one of the best words ever! The tone of your poem is upbeat and happy. Good entry for the prompt with proper line and syllable count.
Best of luck!
Julie
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Twitterpated is one of the best words ever! The tone of your poem is upbeat and happy. Good entry for the prompt with proper line and syllable count.
Best of luck!
Julie
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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You might have heard Shorty (one of my triumvirate nicknames) rarely enters short worded contest being far more superfluous in using words, but I said this to my missus the other day, and she smiled and said that is the sweetest of all the poems you have written since we got wed, and theh the nanni contest appeared.
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Awww, that's really sweet! :-)
Comment from Bobby Jo
romantic, yet our love grows stronger. Or it should. or it should gradually grow that we don't realize it from day to day Love the picture as well this was a fun one.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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romantic, yet our love grows stronger. Or it should. or it should gradually grow that we don't realize it from day to day Love the picture as well this was a fun one.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Welcome, if you haven't been in the past, I don;t recall seeing your name previously, but i am twitterpated with your words, and hope you'll come again for more. Thank you.
