Your Rhyme is Prey
Stalk that rhyme!13 total reviews
Comment from royowen
The wonderful thing about poetry is that one can rhyme or not, wax lyrical...or not, write in strict form like me...or not, be a clot...or not, or call it what...or not, well done, great quirk...or not, well done Maddie, I've invented a few new forms, because we can, make strict rules...or not, good job, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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The wonderful thing about poetry is that one can rhyme or not, wax lyrical...or not, write in strict form like me...or not, be a clot...or not, or call it what...or not, well done, great quirk...or not, well done Maddie, I've invented a few new forms, because we can, make strict rules...or not, good job, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Roy, haha, thanks so very much for your big-hearted review, your benevolent spirit shines through! You put my unease to rest! Maddy
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It?s really easy, it should be fun...and therapeutic.
Comment from Mark Jackson
The words are great you really are up against it if you don't have a computer I sympathise with you. I think it is cleaver of you to announce your syllable count so that we know how we should be reading it. I guess you could always use punctuation in the future a / represents the end of a line. I did notice a slight mistake I think you mean boar rather than bore. The second means to make a hole.
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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The words are great you really are up against it if you don't have a computer I sympathise with you. I think it is cleaver of you to announce your syllable count so that we know how we should be reading it. I guess you could always use punctuation in the future a / represents the end of a line. I did notice a slight mistake I think you mean boar rather than bore. The second means to make a hole.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Hey, Mark! Thanks so much! Yeah, I meant the bore, meaning cause disinterest. I just got a cellphone about 10 months ago, and am not ready for a computer yet! I rather like the / idea, don't know how it'll go over on this site, but I can try it sometime! Really appreciate your feedback!!! Maddy
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Sorry my mistake with the spelling. The / thing is/ accepted form/ if you explain in at the bottom people will/ understand.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh I like this poem a lot. Comparing the poet looking for his rhyme to a hunter sneaking up on his prey is very creative. Some really good word choices like image/scrimmage. Nicely written! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Oh I like this poem a lot. Comparing the poet looking for his rhyme to a hunter sneaking up on his prey is very creative. Some really good word choices like image/scrimmage. Nicely written! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much,
Marilyn! I wasn't sure how this one would fly! Hey, you r Bloody Kisses poem is in the featured section! I knew it would be a hit!! Thanks so much for your kind words and wow, 6*, I am hugely uplifted!
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It's very good, Maddy. You deserve it. My bloody kisses has very mixed review lol they either love it or very much dislike it. but at least they are kind about it. i don't think I will post much horror on here lol