Right in the Eye
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Right in the Eye, pt 4"The adventures and reaches of people with a divine
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Comment from jim vecchio
Glad I read this when I still had six stars! The story is getting more and more interesting. The beginning reminded me of myself. After my wife dies, and I went to my first assisted living situation, there was a resident who kept calling me "Honey!" I used to growl back at her and say, "You're not my Honey! My Honey is in Heaven!"
I hope this story stretches out a long time. Can't wait to see what happens next!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Glad I read this when I still had six stars! The story is getting more and more interesting. The beginning reminded me of myself. After my wife dies, and I went to my first assisted living situation, there was a resident who kept calling me "Honey!" I used to growl back at her and say, "You're not my Honey! My Honey is in Heaven!"
I hope this story stretches out a long time. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you immensely! And for the six stars!
I was hoping that people would accept this twist on the Ben Persons/Tony Bertelli ' divine calling' story.
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Very well done! Can't wait to read more!
