Date Night
A time to remember20 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
Omg! I didn't see that coming at all, John. That's the sign of a good writer, and there is no greater praise I can give to someone who writes passionately and is dedicated to getting it right. I loved this piece, John!
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Omg! I didn't see that coming at all, John. That's the sign of a good writer, and there is no greater praise I can give to someone who writes passionately and is dedicated to getting it right. I loved this piece, John!
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Wow.
Thank you, John. This is an outstanding review I really appreciate.
Six stars are the icing on the cake!
John
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear! I was wondering if was some kind of eHarmony online dating thing and felt that things were moving much too fast and sure enough, it was! Thanks for the laughs.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Oh dear! I was wondering if was some kind of eHarmony online dating thing and felt that things were moving much too fast and sure enough, it was! Thanks for the laughs.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Helen. I?m glad you enjoyed it.
John
Comment from Jeano
This is a real "gotcha" story. I'm glad I hung in until the end, enjoying the moment of him becoming just another "John". I had a good chuckle, great way to start my day. If there is a way of giving this guy a name in the beginning, the switch to John would have a real impact. Loved the story.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is a real "gotcha" story. I'm glad I hung in until the end, enjoying the moment of him becoming just another "John". I had a good chuckle, great way to start my day. If there is a way of giving this guy a name in the beginning, the switch to John would have a real impact. Loved the story.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Great suggestion. I?ll look at that and keep it in mind for future stories.
Thank you.
John (not the John from the story haha)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
For some reason as I read, I knew there was a punch line coming. LOL I had fun reading. Thank you for sharing this with us.
I lay my hands down on the table. She took my queue and with the softness of a dove, placed her hands in mine. (lay down, the adverb as close to the verb it's describing as possible)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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For some reason as I read, I knew there was a punch line coming. LOL I had fun reading. Thank you for sharing this with us.
I lay my hands down on the table. She took my queue and with the softness of a dove, placed her hands in mine. (lay down, the adverb as close to the verb it's describing as possible)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you Barbara.
Much appreciated,
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I suspected the ending to be as so, either that or you awoke from the reverie being viewed. It is a well written short story, and being a man, entranced me til the end. The only confusion for me was B.H. (thinking it was a country, was on one line, and then Russ Hotel the next.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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I suspected the ending to be as so, either that or you awoke from the reverie being viewed. It is a well written short story, and being a man, entranced me til the end. The only confusion for me was B.H. (thinking it was a country, was on one line, and then Russ Hotel the next.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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BH was just part of a made up hotel name.
Thank you, Tom
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You got me. I did not see that coming. Thank you for the surprise. I adore the ironic twist. I am known for them myself. It was all well-done. Enjoy your week. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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You got me. I did not see that coming. Thank you for the surprise. I adore the ironic twist. I am known for them myself. It was all well-done. Enjoy your week. Karen :-)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you for reading.
John
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:-)
Comment from JanPerry
It's a short silly post. With some expansion of your descriptions, longer time frames and more thought, it could be an entertaining story. But it's a fun skit instead.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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It's a short silly post. With some expansion of your descriptions, longer time frames and more thought, it could be an entertaining story. But it's a fun skit instead.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Yes a short silly post as mentioned in the notes. Just having a little fun, not meant to be long and drawn out. Thank you for the generous rating.
Comment from Julie Helms
Excellent punch line!
I read this, seething, she's too good to be true!
Really humorous and enjoyable to read.
She took my queue (cue, queue means line)
My face nestled her curls, (nestled in her curls)
Julie :-)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Excellent punch line!
I read this, seething, she's too good to be true!
Really humorous and enjoyable to read.
She took my queue (cue, queue means line)
My face nestled her curls, (nestled in her curls)
Julie :-)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you Julie for reading and corrections.
Much appreciated ?
John
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, you should have a hot alert on this one! I will have to chase Mr. Law down after reading this one. Well written with a humourous ending. Priceless!
Sending you my best today as always and a virtual six and compliments. (I checked this twice before sending because the last time I sent you a virtual six, it typed something else.)
Sal :))
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Wow, you should have a hot alert on this one! I will have to chase Mr. Law down after reading this one. Well written with a humourous ending. Priceless!
Sending you my best today as always and a virtual six and compliments. (I checked this twice before sending because the last time I sent you a virtual six, it typed something else.)
Sal :))
Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Leave Mr Law be (at least for the afternoon, haha),
Thank you so much Sally!
John
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Too late! Hahaha! He assures me he's never too busy....
Blessings,
Sal :))
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Ah, you?re to funny!
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I know. Occupational Hazzard. ;))
Comment from BethShelby
This story going along in such a lovely romantic way. It seem many the search of love was over and then the punch line when we learn love from thie lady comes with a price. Good one.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This story going along in such a lovely romantic way. It seem many the search of love was over and then the punch line when we learn love from thie lady comes with a price. Good one.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Beth. Thank you so much.
Cheers,
John
