Living On The Edge
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Living On The Edge - Chap 1"The blending of good and evil.
20 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
You're really on a roll. This looks like the beginning of an exciting story. You do descriptions and dialogue in an excellent manner, which brings the story to life.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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You're really on a roll. This looks like the beginning of an exciting story. You do descriptions and dialogue in an excellent manner, which brings the story to life.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Hello, April.
Ended one and started another...I must be crazy! I hope you enjoy this story as much as the last. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You have presented some interesting people. Troy certainly seems to be looking for trouble and knows how to find it. Alyssa seems to be an uncover cop, but maybe not. Tommy could have been a little quicker to save her. I'm looking forward to what comes next.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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You have presented some interesting people. Troy certainly seems to be looking for trouble and knows how to find it. Alyssa seems to be an uncover cop, but maybe not. Tommy could have been a little quicker to save her. I'm looking forward to what comes next.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Hi, Carol
Sorry for being behind, but ending one story then writing another in a weekend left me drowning. I hope to be caught up tonight. Thank you so much for following me into this new adventure. I hope you enjoy it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
You build characters and tell their stories better than Dairy Queen makes ice cream, and that's saying something special from me. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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You build characters and tell their stories better than Dairy Queen makes ice cream, and that's saying something special from me. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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My sweet Ric.... Let's celebrate with a dreamy scoop of ice cream, shall we? I'm thrilled you found the beginning of this story interesting. I hope I can continue to wow you.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I guess I forgot to save the review. I wrote one. This is a very good start t this novel. I enjoyed reading and can't wait to read more. I couldn't produce a chapter a day. I can't write that often.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I guess I forgot to save the review. I wrote one. This is a very good start t this novel. I enjoyed reading and can't wait to read more. I couldn't produce a chapter a day. I can't write that often.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I thought I couldn't either, but the adrenalin is flowing and my muse is doing flips. Thanks so much for always being there, Barbara.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Terry Broxson
Carol, you deserve and earned a six star for a wonderful first chapter. It opens the door to lots of opportunities. You brought a life to your characters. It will be fun seeing where they go and what happens. Outstanding start. Terry.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Carol, you deserve and earned a six star for a wonderful first chapter. It opens the door to lots of opportunities. You brought a life to your characters. It will be fun seeing where they go and what happens. Outstanding start. Terry.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Wow...I am thrilled that you found the story exciting. There will be plenty of twists and turns within the book. I appreciate your comments and support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the very best with being an able to accomplish writing a book in a month. I am sure you're aThis is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the very best with being a able to accomplish writing a book in a month. I am sure you're a horrific writer and you probably will make the goal.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the very best with being an able to accomplish writing a book in a month. I am sure you're aThis is very well written, and I enjoyed reading it. I wish you the very best with being a able to accomplish writing a book in a month. I am sure you're a horrific writer and you probably will make the goal.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you for starting a new chapter with me. I hope you find as much enjoyment in it as the other book. Thankyou so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
Great start, interesting characters, lots of action, and you couldn't pay me enough money to be an undercover agent posing in that situation! I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes!
Julie
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Great start, interesting characters, lots of action, and you couldn't pay me enough money to be an undercover agent posing in that situation! I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes!
Julie
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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The story should have a lot of twists and turns since that's part of my style. I am glad you enjoyed the beginning and hope that you will continue to do so. Thank you, Julie
Smiles, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Well, I'm sure this one will be interesting. You are off to good start, and writing in a way that is sure to bring readers back for more. This one is a lot different from the last one, but I know you'll do it justice.
Beth
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Well, I'm sure this one will be interesting. You are off to good start, and writing in a way that is sure to bring readers back for more. This one is a lot different from the last one, but I know you'll do it justice.
Beth
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I shall give it my best, Beth. I am trying to move past my own melodrama and put my efforts in something with a different flavor. I hope you will enjoy it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
Ah, I remember the style Carol, there are some excellent crime/romance/mystery writers on site, and you have rapidly increasing your confidence and abilities and tuning in to the writing, and perhaps you've laid to rest, at least physically, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Ah, I remember the style Carol, there are some excellent crime/romance/mystery writers on site, and you have rapidly increasing your confidence and abilities and tuning in to the writing, and perhaps you've laid to rest, at least physically, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I hope I've found myself again, Roy and I can continue doing what I love so much. I appreciate your constant support.
Smiles, Carol
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I think you have, as long as you're not isabella
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well done
Comment from Wendy G
Very good! That's quite a startling and dramatic opening and obviously this book will be packed with action. You are back to writing in a big way. Already a few different threads, and some complex relationships with the brothers. Well done.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Very good! That's quite a startling and dramatic opening and obviously this book will be packed with action. You are back to writing in a big way. Already a few different threads, and some complex relationships with the brothers. Well done.
Wendy
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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I was "taunted" to join the Book in a Month contest and I can never turn my back on a challenge. Might as well take advantage of my euphoria at actually finishing Life's Twisted Road. At times it was a painful write. I appreciate your kindness.
Smiles, Carol
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You will do it, and with aplomb. Your writing is and always has been outstanding! Best wishes for it!
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Thank you so much. I feel blessed today by everyone's responses. A boost I needed.
