Comment from Navada

Excellent

I like your choice of imagery here. You've chosen active terms to highlight the behaviour of the "tickling" wind in "severing" the leaves and thereby invoking Fall's "sympathy". The actions of the natural forces at play here are prominent and lively. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Excellent review, thank you. I love this time of the year.
God bless,
Steve

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It always amazed me how trees know just when to shed their leaves and do it all together like a community of like-minded souls, a fine post, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Same here, unlike spring here in Texas when the trees bloom too soon, then here comes another frost.

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

A well written poem. It is difficult to write a haiku but you have done a good job. I love the first line of the poem. The artwork complements your poem. I wish you the very best in the contest.
With kind regards

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you, Bridge for this excellent review. I love crafting these shorts.
God bless,
Steve

Comment from leather

Excellent

Short and succinct, but quite visual by way of word and illustration. You did a great job in using the colored text that matches the central color theme. That's excellent attention to detail, which pays off well in this case.
P.S.> I'm out of six-star ratings.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you, leather, for this amazing review. It is worth more than any six stars to me. Thank you for taking the time to review.
God bless,
Steve

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is an excellent haiku, the satori line is very sympathetic with the rest of the poem dear friend, I love the connection with autumn, and am glad you still have a connection with fall, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you, Roy, for this excellent review, my friend. This is my favorite time of the year.
God bless,
Steve

reply by royowen on 14-Nov-2023

Good job

reply by royowen on 14-Nov-2023

Good job

Comment from gansach

Excellent

This haiku is descriptive, great picture used to illustrate it, but it also presents a picture of its own with its wording. I like it very much, great seasonal poem.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you, Gansach, for this excellent review. I do enjoy crafting these shorts.
God Bless,
Steve

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes,

Alex

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you,
Alexandra, for this excellent review. I enjoy the haiku style. Fun to create.
God bless,
Steve

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is a beautifully presented piece of poetry written in haiku style. You have used some lovely imagery and alliteration to emphasise your well chosen words. A bit of personification in the trees being tickled. Well done.

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you, Wendyanne for the excellent review, my friend. I enjoy messing with these little pieces.
God Bless,
Steve